Creative Writing Fate of the Curses

Yes, for the most of you, you may or may not recall me starting a bit of something a long time ago titled 'Fate of the Curses', but now, I've finally started working again!^^

I was taking it a bit too easy during that past month or so due to the holidays, and MegaCon and such, but I started the writting process again. I've changed almost the entire thing. I've also tried it to be a bit more clear on some things, but obviously not on everything, since all is revealed as the story goes on.

I'd put the entire thing here, but each chapter is 3 or 4 pages on Microsoft Word, size 12, Times New Roman. So I've taken the liberty of making them pics, and having them hosted. Don't worry, they're on a readable scale.

The grammmar errors should also be in a minimum, since I got my editor to help me on those parts. My editor being Zanza

Hope you guys enjoy the first part in the story! The chapters on these pages are:
Chapter I-A Story of Fate
Chapter II-Welcome to my life!
Chapter III-The Darker Side of life
And he'a are the links:
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10
Page 11

Hope to get some comments on this also. I'll probably be working on the fourth chapter later today, if I'm not already.

-Seishin

 

More readings yes.

First off didn't finish what you have now. Need to read others but will come back to it.

So far. Chapter One.

The good: It is definitely a different story. It is very interesting and different. I noticed you called them aliens but yet still people.

The bad: It runs pretty fast. There were some grammar parts that I was shaky on. Don’t now what these people look like. Only a few things obviously human enough or the child would have stood out.