Creative Writing father

When I first opened my eyes
I can remember then
I seen your smiling face
And open heart letting me in

I know you love me, and I know you care
in even though some times I can't see
I know your hands are out there
always reaching for me

So we do the clebration
That we can always try to do
All across the nation
We are celberating you
I love you dad..

Happy Father's Day

This is for the dad's I know it sux..but I try

 

Same here my dad is like evil.. i swear...he Did ALOT of crazy stuff when he was with us for likea week or so =D he lives in LA Now =( i have to live wiht him in 2 years

Tat Was a Greta Poem

 

i really dont think this is the right place to be saying how much everyone hates their dad......

anyway very nice poem Hazel kudos to you <3

 

Thank you all. But to those who said that stuff about their father..he may be a jerk...but when he's gone you'll really see how much he's really done for you. Or mabye not mabye he's really a *******

 

Oh..that WAS good!

Well I live with my dad and it's my mom who's the ******* :anger2:

Well it was a really wonderfull poem (I wish I could accomplish as much in my poems)

 

Amen. It's the moms who are assholes..well you have greatie poems and I love yours!!!!

 

i thought it was wonderful. i wish i could say the same about my father though.

 

nice poem

my dad is still here and hes an *******

my soon-to-be stepdad has been more of a father to me than my bio-dad. and i've only known him for like a year.

some guys are just better dads than others.

 

Nice poem. I think we all at some point hate our parents and some have good reason too. Some may never even know a parent sad but true. Anyway keep up the good work.

 

u made the little white flower to grow in the middle of the black field of my father's history ;X
kidden eh ;P