Art First Page to my manga!!!!!!!!! Wahoo

I had this brilliant idea for a manga, so I started on it a week or two ago, and here is the first page without the dialogue, it took me a wopping like 5 hours to draw! That is so much for me. Any way I hope you enjoy and maybe i will finish the first chapter soon!

 

thats incredible work! you made that up yourself? jeeze I can't wait to see the rest of it, that really is good, you get an A++++ in my book

~sweetasuka~

 

Ooh yeah, perspective drawings are unbeatable! (most people never try it) The buildings look good with the little details. Is the dark circular thing a crater or a puddle? It doesn't look deep enough to be a crater, plus the shading on it throws me off.

 

The crater looks a bit weird, actually it looks more like a cone with the pod on top.
Also, the sky looks off compared to the detailed background. The sky itself is only one solid color with clouds in them. If you made it into a gradient, it would've been better.
Anyway, still great detail, and I just KNOW there will be a Saiyajin coming out of that pod!!!
o.o

 

:sweat: Geeze that's some nutty detail you put into that pic. Excellent stuff.

 

i like.
can't wait to see/ hear more pics/ about ur manga
^_^

 

Thanks every body! lol your right superfly, there is a super person coming out of the pod. and the craters are supposed to look wierd although I had trouble doing them. they are supposed to be more like crators caused by an equal energy outburst or something rather than an impact crator. any way I am working on page 3 right now and soon i probly will ahve it up on a website. And if any 1 wants to see page 2 i can post it.

 

Please post it, I would love to see it. You have great work.

 

well Iwould post it... but my image uploader appears to be down again.... Damnit and it is too big to post on attachment ARRRGhhhh oh well maybe in a few hours it will be working

 

It looks terrific. The only thing I don't like is the building with the Ben Scott billboard. It's got probably a third of its structure gone and at the worst possible place to take that damage too. I think it should have collapsed.

Elsewise keep it up.

 

WOWZERS Im amazed there are so many good artists here, I think the first page you did is spectacular, i cant wait to see how the rest will come along, you are such a good artist, and remember to keep up the good work!!!!

 

Well as promised here is page 2. I have no real clue how its gonna go from here because i tried to draw page 3 but it just did not look right soo i dunno...

 

wooow, your second page is just as good! you do great work I am impressed

 

Nice work man!! It looks really good. I don't know though, for some reason I kinda like the solid colour of the sky with the insanley blended detail of the city. Nice work though, it looks great!

 

...wow... that looks awsome!!!!! but um, what's the thing in the middle?