Creative Writing Forgotten Ballad

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  1. Ninja Yuffie

    Ninja Yuffie New Member

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    No-one knows
    How I feel
    A little needle
    a pinprick of steel
    to quiet the scarlet
    A shine on the snow
    A bitter cut carved
    in the moonlights soft glow.
    A bridge of inspiration
    something beautiful in my mind
    Lost lips absolute
    On an Autum leaf, majestic, but dry.
    The love letters fell
    like a waltz from a dream
    I slew the words on every piece of paper
    and they still have not forgiven me.
    A liquid rose
    a perfect fruit
    a shadowing reason
    a soul so easily bruised.
    In a deep December somewhere
    is where I belong
    Fate states that I am lonley,
    stuck under the unbreakable glass of dawn.
    My flute plays a melody
    a soft lunar wind
    a starry blade dances
    releasing the ballad within.
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Pretty pretty pretty..I like you man..you got that sexah avatar and you right good poetry! So kewl..i know im creepy
     
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    Ninja Yuffie New Member

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    I enjoy the company of creepy people such as myself, so dont worry about it ^_~ I am sexy, what can I say? Bwahahahaa lol.... Thanks for the comment.
     
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  4. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Word.

    I liked the poem to me it seems like you have written a few.
     
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