Art gimme hints to improve this pic

hey yall i just wanna ask if this is good or not good or something between it

 

WOW! Thatz aMAZing (sorry, bad pun.....)
but seriously! Really kewl pic! Damn I wanna draw that good! *pouts*
although, the is no white round the pupils of her eyes,
other than that, U need an expert to find flaws in it :dizzy2:
(welcome to M2A btw )

 

Welcome to M2A,Maze.


Thats a great picture.The only thing that you might want to change is around the top of the picture,its a little blurry.

 

I think it look great,but I think it would be easier to view at a smaller size.

 

many thanks

hey yall
i thank you all for the reply's
actually the drawing made my girlfriend and i colored it in photoshop i thought it would look pretty cool so i needed some advise if it really looked good.

someone here know a site to post pictures that experts can watch it so i can get info from them?

thnx

greetz Maze

 

Danime

You just gotta send in fanart, and this guy looks at it and critisizes it in "professional" or "amateur" mode. He also does it with a lot of humor and charm. Quite a sick sense of humor this guy has, I absolutely love it. It's actually a great site all around tbh. Check er out.

 

Now I'm no expert but the Extreme change of skin tone bothers me a bit. Other than that I find it extremely well done!

 

yeah thnx

youll have to zoom out because its to big
it needs to fits on the screen
then it looks better and not so blurry and distorted

greetz Maze

 

I think it looks good like that...maybe if you outlined the face with a white glow if ya see what I mean....You know so it looks a bit an eclipse if you can get an image on that.

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Its good i like it! Anyone wana rate my plaese?

 

awesome,but but hwo amazing,cool picture,keep it don't change anything it's it's c l

 

Its okay but...... wheres the body?

 

great for the pc! what program did u use? i would just say to add details to the eyes