Creative Writing Hacker's First Try! (take it easy on me, i'm new at this poetry thing!!^^)

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  1. Hacker

    Hacker ~Richie Rich~

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    Darkness Falls


    Darkness covers the place,
    when i see Blood Emotions on your face.
    When evil fashes from your Felonious Eyes,
    when you thought old love was a nothing but a Lie.


    Darkness turns into smog, and it holds you tight,
    then you wish for your savior, or your Angel of Light.
    I feel what you feel, i don't want to stay,
    I want to do what Engel did, i want to Runaway.

    But if i leave, i'll leave all my friends
    and i'd never be able to See you Again.
    So Here I am, standing in the dark, holding your hand, you beside me,
    and we both think things are a Rainbow of Insanity.

    So together we stand, throughout it all,
    no matter what, Darkness Falls.





    i'd like to thank all the people who's titles were used for the making of Darkness Falls. and i capatalized all the titles, but here are the featured--->Blood Emotions, Here I am, See you Again, Rainbow of Insanity, Lie, Runaway, Angel of Light, Felonious Eyes. Sorry if i forgot any. again domo arigatou everybody!
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    nah, You are good. And the song by Linkin Park Runaway is my theme song,. Ya'll have people who love you like sisters here. Be loved and be unloved life is like that! :D
     
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  3. Hitokiri Tenma

    Hitokiri Tenma New Member

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    it was very good. i really enjoyed it.
     
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