Creative Writing Have you ever.....???

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Ginger, Jun 15, 2003.

  1. Ginger

    Ginger New Member

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    Have you ever woken p in the middle of the night with a poem/song/story in your head, like it was put there by an alternate force? I have, heres one:

    Black velvet sky
    casting shadows over the sleeping people
    long lost whispers of the dawn grow louder
    as the new day creeps over the horizen
    waking the sleeping people
    and starting the cycle over again.

    Kinda bad, but toally random doncha think? thats just one of em too!!!

    ~Ginger
     
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  2. Migoto Neko

    Migoto Neko New Member

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    That poem wasn't bad at all. Sort of like Westernized haiku feeling to it.

    This happens to me all the time. Even when I'm awake, sometimes a poem will just pop into my head. Usually, if I'm driving fast on the highway on a sunny day with good music, I get really creative and have to write stuff down while I'm driving (don't try this at home people).

    Here's one that came to me the other day:

    Amour, so in love
    A cool breeze across the soul
    Flames on the body

    My problem is that I'm usually to lazy to revise anything I've written. It would be much better if I did.
     
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  3. Yonaki

    Yonaki New Member

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    I have a couple of time. Mostly my idea came from dream. Sometime I even try to think of idea during class. Haven't got caught yet. And I don't plan on getting caught either.

    I got a couple idea for stories. I'm just either to lazy or I don't know how to put it into words.
     
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