Creative Writing help again

fanfiction help again PLEAZE!!

ok i already asked for this but didn't find wat i was lookin for now heres along the lines what i want.

:reincarnation ok traveling in time been done to many times something with action/humor/romance/fighting main characters r 2girlz+3boyz if u have the time make some suggestions 2 help me thanx i highly appreciate it!!!!!!

 

okay so there's these 3 boys and they're ninja masters and they set off on a journey and after a while they meet these two girls and at first its cool but then they discover the girls are reincarnations of their parents. the girls dont know this and become attracted to the guys (except for the fat one) but the boys are too freaked out about the girls being the reincarnation of their parents so they go off on a journey to try to get rid of them but the girls just keep following and you can have a funny animal join them like a dog or a bear ha ha ha ha.

Oh God, I meant that paragraph as parody and it sounds like a real suggestion.

 

thanx :dizzy: 'good' suggestion

 

You technically don't need to go back in time to be reincarnation. You can just show how this is done. Take a person and have their reincarnation effect them where they are now.

 

a thought

You can have three differnt boys each one dose a crime and gets killed and gets sent to the underworld and the king of the under world gives them a choice stay here for enternal suffering or capture anf send the escaped demons back to the underworld they accept as the story goes along they met two girls who are on the same mission but orders are fom heaven and they join forces and so on

I would add more if I had more time to think about it