Art Hey! Please tel me how i could improve on this!

I did this in about 15-20 minutes and it looks sort of good. It's also a copy of Zanza's b-day present, but it's the only comp pic i've done so....yeah.^^

 

is her face supposed to be red like that?

 

Maybe you can make the outlines a bit thinner. I can't really think of anything else, but the lines don't really matter.

 

Um... Yeah it was supposed to be red but the computer freaked and made it darker, thicker, and brighter than it was supposed to be.:sweat2: Thanks you guys, i really appreciate it.