Creative Writing Hum, decisions, decisions

There's a little poetry contest going on at my school. Naturally, for lack of anything better to do, I'm going to enter it. Can't really decide which poem I should enter, though, of the two I wrote... I sort of have an idea, but bleh. Lemme know what you guys think.
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"In The Night"

Bleeding scarlet roses
Crimson bloody petals
In the back of my mind,
I can see a glowing ivory sphere
With running red rivirs
Dripping off into a pool
A growing vermilion puddle
Rippling with reflections
Of an astral Apocalypse
Of stars ever-shining
And comets ever-soaring
With meteor-shower rains
Ripping holes in the fabric of time
As sable shadow tendrils
From the pits of Judecca
Reach up above all
To rape the Heavens
And bury everything
In the grave of the night
And let vampires and werewolves roam
Under the light of the bleeding moon
To steal our souls and breath
As devilish shadows creep
And impish voices laugh
As these lost souls
Who follow Satan's song
And the cacophony of screams that makes Hell sing
In an endless dance of the damned.

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"My Morning Star"

Like a piercing winter chill
Darkness no emotion could ever fill
Hope sliced with tendrils of defeat
That explains why the morbid is so sweet
Like a never-ending puzzle in my head
Can't figure out why I'm better off dead
Why is it in the shadows I confide?
Why do I keep thinking of suicide?
Why can't I keep my thoughts straight?
Why, for the good, do I have to wait?
Why can't I just let it all go?
Why is there no one to tell me no?
Why is there no sun to wash away the cold?
Why do I have to be afraid rather than bold?
Why can't it all just go away?
Why do I have to suffer everyday?
Why, God, do you make me cry?
Why does everything good pass me by?
Was it because I didn't care enough?
Is that why you made my life so tough?
Was this just some kind of test?
Is that why there's this dagger in my chest?
This must be how he felt when he fell
When he was banished to Hell
I won't let you get the best of me
I'll pull through, I'll make you see
Just like him, I will endure
And you will never be my cure
I will always look to that star
That shines in morning, near or far
My hope will come from this bringer of light
And I will no longer worry over your endless blight
No more will you make me cry
As long as my love is near by
And together we will go
Further into what is unknown
She and I won't be afraid
That we won't reach this 'paradise' you made
I'll live for her and her for I
And let everyone else just pass us by
We won't fear what they think
When we refuse to join their endless link
We will walk our own path
And we won't fear your wrath
We'll walk with heads held high
And like that, together, we will die
And when the day of judgement comes
We won't regret a single thing we've done

 

Very, very nice. :bleed: I can't even pick between them, sorry