Art I hope it works this time

...testing...didn't work the past few times, hopefully it will now. @_@ Any suggestions on how to get smooth, clean lines?

 

Gaaaa! Sure now it works that I don't really have a message with it lol, anywho I was going to say that this was a pic I did a few months back while trying to figure out an art program. I'm reasonably happy with it. (truth is I got sick of working on it so I pretend its done. hee hee hee :sweat: The mouth is still weird, boo mouth!) But yeah, I ink my drawings before I scan them (300 dpi), but the lines still come out jaggedy. Any thoughts?

 

hi hi. ^^... this pic is good ^^.. i like the hair alot... the coloring CG is good too.. the thing is the mouth. (maybe it's your style) the mouth seems to be kinda like a .. jmmm.. i don't know how to describe it.. well.. it llooks weird.. but it's good..

so far.. looks good. good job ^^

 

The mouth is kinda.. weird.. But the rest is kinda cool Is it your first drawing?

Arcueid

 

i think this was her second .. right? (maybe i'm wrong)

 

I think the shading on the forehead gives a weird shape to the skull. The bridge of the nose is kinda long, and the nose doesn't match the character's race. (Usually a non-Caucasian nose isn't so narrow and pointed.) Otherwise, the shadings look nice. And the vignette on the lower corner looks cool.

 

The mouth. It looks like shes biting her lower lip

(nevermind me, i know nothing )

 

Thanks again guys, for the comments, its awesome to have feedback.

 

great that people around here recieves feedback ^^.. anyways.. once again.. ^^ i like the hair alot. hehe .. lol... >_< u have the touch to make the colors look smooth