Creative Writing I open my eyes

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Kos-Mos, Aug 26, 2003.

  1. Kos-Mos

    Kos-Mos New Member

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    I open my eyes
    By me


    I open my eyes
    You're all I see
    I open my ears
    Youre song is so sweet
    I breath
    Your kiss is so right

    I see you
    You're walking away
    I hear your song
    You're not singing for me
    I feel your kiss
    and cry as is ends

    I know you're leaving
    Soon you'll fade away
    As you're song ends
    I know I'll hear another
    I'm crying
    and soon my tears will dry

    I open my eyes
    You're all I see
    I open my ears
    You're song is so sweet
    I breath
    You're kiss is so right

    Well?
     
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  2. Nakoruru

    Nakoruru New Member

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    That is so.....COOL! I wonder how people can think of stuff like that, I know I sure can't.
     
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