Creative Writing I promise.

I want to take the weight out of living,

Burn superstitions and make it everything.

Like perfect, even if it becomes fake.

I'll make this world you like to hate amazing.

I won't lose you to the flow of people,

Shrouded in the storm of their egos.

I won't make you stay up late while I cry,

Just please don't let me go.

Not here, not now, not ever.

I remember the promise made in the dark,

About passion and freedom and hope

Even before we felt that spark.

I promised to always love you,

I promised to make you my own.

So now you're coming back around

And you're going to find us at home.

Your hands on my body,

Your fingers pressed into my flesh,

I promise to never let you get away from me,

I promise that until you're with me, there's no rest.

I want the curve of your body

Riding up against mine with a tingle of heat,

And a whole nights time to just be..

Just be willing to acomplish this feat.

Make me warm in the cool room we dwell in,

Make me moan when you're ready to hide.

Body pulsing in mine constant and needed,

Take from me what you need to find.

I'll be your familiar,

The medium between you and the end.

I'll be your slave, I'll constantly cave,

Your lover, your muse, your friend.

 

That...was...AWSOME! Though I like how you added both lust, and caring. Usually its one or the other.
-sheeta

 

How I <3 your poetry..lemme see. This is my favorite of them all actually ^_^

 

Simply kick-ass. Would make an awesome song, if you ask me. Very Emo (punk to you, Peachy).

 

They called me the emo prodigy in school. Thanks everyone. I'm alittle upset though..I wasn't nominated for best writer in the awards section. =/ Pssh, what a let down.

 

I was hoping you would be the one to get the award. I can't remember who I voted though so I can't tell you who I voted for. Sorry about the awards but I love the poem/song/what ever you called it ^_^. I really like how it goes near the end and to it, much better than my things in my own opinion (My poems/songs may be really old because I either (One: Don't have time to make anything.)...(Two: Busy with RPGs because I love role-playing ^_^)...or (Three: I busy with something about writing my story because I'm writing a book ^_^ and something else dealing with RPGs but not saying yet ^_^). I hope you get the next award though, lucky.

 

Meh, I'll be around for years to come. I'll get the award one day..*shakes fist angrily* ONEDAY!!! MUAHAHAHA!

And I love your fanfiction Lance. =) I think you're a wonderful writer for your age. As for me..I do poetry from time to time just because it strikes me as time to do so.

As for rping..I rp on gaiaonline. My username Is Fortune Vereaux if you ever join, so feel free to add me. xD

 

What's the URL for it? I'm interested now ^_^

 

www.gaiaonline.com

It's a huge site, has lots of things on it. But I use it for rping. =P

 

I looked at it and I can't seem to have any spaces in my name, why? You do, at least I think.

 

I've changed my name on the site about five thousand times..Before gaia was updated. The site was in it's beginning phases when I joined. Heh, kinda like Boards. =D

What is your name for it?

 

I haven't joined it yet but I want my name to be "Lance Leingod" ^_^