Creative Writing In need of some Suggestions

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  1. Fushigi Rockna

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    See I want to start a Fushigi Yuugi fanfic, telling the stories of the first two mikos, Takiko (the Genbuu no Miko) and Suzuno (the Byakkou no Miko) the problem is: body parts and powers for the Byakkou and Genbuu seishi. Only two of the genbuu seishi have appeared and only three of the Byakkou, and everytime the seishi has their symbol on a body area that hasn't been used already (with exception to the forehead, Tamahome and Nakago both have their symbols on their forehead, so one from each of the seishi of the other two gods shall have the symbol on their foreheads) Right now I need suggestions about body parts not used already.

    Ones used already:
    Forehead [Tamahome and Nakago]
    left side of neck [Hotohori]
    left side of chest [Nuriko]
    right knee [Chichiri]
    right forearm [Tasuki]
    palm of left hand [Mitsukake]
    left foot [Chiriko]
    right shoulder [Amiboshi]
    left shoulder [Suboshi]
    upper left thigh [Soi]
    right hip [Ashitare]
    right lower abdomen [Tomo]
    neck (that's the front part) [Miboshi]
    rigth eye (that has GOT to hurt) [Hikitsu]
    left side of back [Tomite]
    left cheek [Tokaki]
    left breast [Subaru]
    back of right hand [Tatara]


    I don't wnat to use the opposite sides of body parts already sued cause that's increative.

    So far i have thought up of the stomach and the wrist. I just need some help thinking of other body parts BESIDES the 'censored' areas. (Don't be sick. and don't argue about how Subaru's symbol is on her breast, I just don't want someone's symbol on their ****, THANK YOU)
    So with the forehead part used in both, that'll leave 4 Genbuu seishi needing of body parts, and 3 Byakkou ones. Add the fact i ahve two body parts already thought up that leaves 5 other parts to be suggested.

    And any suggestions of powers for them are welcome as well. ^^ I cna do appearance myself (actually, there are four Genbuu seishi who have appeared but Uramiya and Hatsui only appeared for brief seconds, so no signs or powers were seen from them)
    So, PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE help me think of some. ^^;

    And yes I do know the other seishi's names. See here and here
     
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  2. Basher

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    You need body parts aye? :D

    I am not sure of the story but I can help with the parts.

    Basher's Parts <- That sounds so wrong :D

    -Tongue
    -roof of the mouth
    -back side of hand (may be opposite but way cool)
    -on the top of a head (okay the head that has the brains in it..ah never mind. Anyways have the person be bald)
    -lower side of back (nice place for tattoos)
    -ankle
    -butt (yep nothing wrong with it there)
    -middle of the back
    -along the jaw line

    Sorry that is all I can think of for now. Hope that helps some.
     
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  3. Fushigi Rockna

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    Tongue and roof of mouth: can't do unfortunatly. the symbols appear when they use their powers and it needs to be almost clearly visible, also, that would look really weird. :glazed:
    Back side of hand: already done, unfortunatly. T-T
    on top of head: I was thinking of that too, it may not be a bad idea.
    lower side of back: was thinking of that too, but like in the small of the back...
    ankle: that's actually a really good idea, I think I'll use that
    butt: lol, I was gonna use that one too! i just didn't mention it :p
    middle of back: nah... they're be too many symbols on the backs...
    along the jaw line: i don't think that's possible T-T wah

    I'm debating if i should still use wrist, i forgot about the elbow...

    So yeah, I think i ahve enough body parts ideas, what about powers?
     
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  4. ~ Zack ~

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    I'm not sure what these symbols look like or how big/small they are. Buuut... how about around the naval, on the wrist (like right by where the bend of the hand would be) or near the eye-temple. Would be kind of interesting.
     
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