Inu-Yasha InuYasha Afventure II By Digitaldog

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What do you think?

  1. 5 *Great Traveling Writer*

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  2. 4 *Ok my dare fiction writer*

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  3. 3 *Where do you get your ideas from*

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  4. 2 *too close to trashy*

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  5. 1 *You got this from the garbage*

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  6. Inbetween Good & Bad

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  1. Digitaldog

    Digitaldog New Member

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    Here is the begining Chapter of a new season I'm making myself.

    Episode 1: The Piper

    We were walking. Inu and Kagome weren’t talking. Miroku was too quiet not to be planning a pervert attack. Sango was on her guard and Shippou was well um dunno exactly.

    Suddenly we heard music that sounded like a pipe and Kagome expressed “What is that?”

    “It sounds like a pipe” Sango pointed out the obvious

    “I think we must know that miss smarty slayer” InuYasha said but he seemed off, he seemed soothed by the pipe

    “A demon must be playing it” Miroku said but he too was soothed

    The pipe was so calm but who is playing it. The sound was so soothing and relaxing. Finally InuYasha let out “Lets find out whos playing it”

    They followed the sound liking every tune. When they got to a clearing it was the night of the crescent moon. They saw something, it was on a hill. It looked like a woman but also a demon.

    The woman had long whitish silver hair that was in a drooped ponytail. She wore a long sleeved t-shirt with each peace of the yingyang on each sleeve that was white other wise, then purple pants with a waist cape in the front and back that had a yingyang on the top and bottom with squiggle lines, and a scarf that was a wingless dragon like demon. She had paws, 5 dog tails, and markings on her face. On her forehead she had a crescent moon like Sees and a star. Under her right eye she had 3 dots going \ then under her left had 2 ~ going /. Other than that she carried her pipe, a bow & arrow set, and dagger.

    The woman continued to play for awhile then finally stopped.

    “Bravo, Bravo” Kagome said

    The woman’s eyes lit up “Now I’ll take back my sword”

    Now InuYasha had fear written all over him. Does this woman truly own the Tetsaiga and why is InuYasha so full of fear! Next………

    __Next Time on InuYasha__

    Kagome: InuYasha, why have you never told us? She is very great at piping but does she really own the Tetsaiga? InuYasha reveal this woman! InuYasha: Inu Sis
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    Just tell me how it is, its not the best I know. If you want to say something like 'Post this somewhere else' then leave me alone. I'm a traveling fanfiction writer.

    Check this out at www.Fanfiction.net
     
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  2. neoblacklady

    neoblacklady ~*Tpyo Godedses*~

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    I ehh like it ^_^ its not badddd and its not...horrid and its ok :)
    very descriptive :)
    in all truth its good :)
     
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  3. Digitaldog

    Digitaldog New Member

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    Episode 2: Inu Sis
    “Your sword” Kagome said “Its InuYasha”

    The woman just smiled “On the contraire, even ask Inu”

    “Sh………Sh……… Shiro” InuYasha stumbled “Is it”

    She smiled again “Yes my little brother”

    “InuYasha, you never told me you had a sister” Shippou said “But I never knew 2 siblings would steal the Tetsaiga”

    Shiro then frowned “I do not need to steal my own possession” With that she flipped and grabbed the Tetsaiga “Back in worthy palms” And she was holding the blade but it was in between her 2 paws then slipped. “Man, I need to get used to hold a sword in my paws again”

    “Hey Shiro” InuYasha called “I’m the new guardian of the Tetsaiga”

    “You still are not ready” She said

    Kagome eyes opened “You mean, you stole the Tetsaiga”

    InuYasha anime falls “NO!”

    “What do you want of us ½ demon” Sango said

    “I got what I came for so now I leave” She said and almost left but InuYasha stopped her

    InuYasha had his yellow eyes set on Shiro “Give me back the Tetsaiga”

    “OK” she said as though she gave in “Fetch” With that she imprisoned the Tetsaiga into a tree and InuYasha got stuck whenever he went near it “Now both of us don’t have it”

    InuYasha whimpering said “But you trained me with the Tetsaiga and said I’d be guardian one day”

    “One day” she said as she sat on the ground and started to play again. By now Miroku had a nosebleed from such a pretty woman and Sango was ready to hit him with her board.

    “I’ll go look for foods while yall set up camp” Kagome said

    Shippou went with her and Sango & Miroku stayed. Shiro continued her piping which was sorrowful this time. She seemed to be evil yet good.

    Nobody talked for awhile until InuYasha opened his yap and said “Shiro what is your purpose besides the Tetsaiga”

    “My purpose?” Shiro said “I must find the Jewel of 5 Destinies that’s why I need the Tetusaiga”

    Sango “The jewel of 5 destinies, that equals the powers of The Shikon No Tama”

    “I’m back” Kagome echoed and saw nothing really done “I though yall were to make camp”

    Kirara and Shippou smiled at each other than giggled. Well Kirara smiled anyhow.

    ___Next Time On InuYasha___

    Kagome: Shiro? Whats that dagger? Huh? So you mean Tetusaiga is Inu’s sword! Why do you claim it? InuYasha: Tetsoona and Seiren Jewel
     
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  4. Guts

    Guts 100 man slayer

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    Your a pretty enthusiastic writer Digitaldog.But it was kind of hard for me to follow your series.Still it's a good story.:)
     
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  5. Mika-chan

    Mika-chan New Member

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    I like it! It's cool. I write things like that all the time.. actualy, my writings are normaly crossovers... Inu-yasha/sailor moon/Ranma 1/2 / and Slayers... o.o scary. ^^;; keep up the good work!
     
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  6. Reine

    Reine Guest

    Amazing!

    Jewel of 5 desties? Wow! I could never think of anything like that! You a very creative writer. I liked how you told what would happen next time. Just like the real thing! :)
     
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  7. chiquitabanana

    chiquitabanana finally legal

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    Its a little confusing, but still godd!:)
     
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