Creative Writing it has no title

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  1. Jackabee

    Jackabee Captain Jackabee Sparrow

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    No one can hear it but I'm screaming inside

    A comparison to the dark, flickers of joy provide

    People all around, but no one is really there to me

    Harbor to the storm, naught but chaos none can see

    Far beyond the surface a monster rages on incredibly fierce

    Swirling in the deepest of darkness that no light can pierce

    For every good thing done, twenty-one are wrong

    Insecurity, every step is faltering, every path is long

    If I had the key to cure all ills, It's already too late

    If I were the best at something, I'd still be second rate

    It would be my fault if somehow the world were to end

    I would still be alone even in the embrace of a friend

    No one knows it, but deep inside I am crying

    No one thinks about it, but even wingless birds dream of flying






    Just for reference I wrote this on the night I graduated.
     
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  2. Yossarian

    Yossarian Yossarian Lives!

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    Awesome...

    this is one of your better works you've posted so far.

    keep up the good work.
     
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