Creative Writing it's not what you think....

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  1. Bloodberry

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    I drip on the floor. looking at my hands, i can still see his neck. i can feel how comfortably my grip fits.a breathe escaping up and out of the gasping mouth. blood crusts on me now as i reflect on it all.
    he was warm and soft and wet inside. i slipped into the wound easliy. it opened graciously to my hands, arms. an internal exploration, i claimed all that i wanted.
    initially, he had strained against the confining ropes. choking on the gag, he tried to scream. i licked his tears away. he wiggled and squirmed as my arms moved inside.
    reaching though his belly, i felt his ribs on top of my arms. they pressed down on top of my fingers as he struggled to breathe.[e1]i turned my left hand over and rubbed one. a smooth and bumpy feeling to my touch. he let a groan of pain escape as i ran my fingers along one.[/e1]



    to be continued...
     
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    Bloodberry, Aug 22, 2002
  2. luvweaver

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    That's disgusting!!! YUK!!!! EWWW!!!!

    :dizzy2:

    *shivers* Just the image of it makes me want to get sick... so what is it about?
     
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    luvweaver, Aug 22, 2002
  3. Bloodberry

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    what do you think it's about? ^-^
     
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    Bloodberry, Aug 22, 2002
  4. luvweaver

    luvweaver Ad Jesum per Mariam

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    A really psicotic murder. Man, licking the tears... please! You scare me!

    Unless of course, it's a birth scene, where the ropes are the umbilical cord. Still, sounds too sick.
     
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    luvweaver, Aug 22, 2002
  5. MamiyaOtaru

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    eewwww^tm

    Since it's not what it seems, I have no idea what it is. Not really sure i want to :p very.. evocative hehe
     
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    MamiyaOtaru, Aug 22, 2002
  6. ~ Zack ~

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    Dude, kick ***! :D That's like, uber-groovy... the first sentence or two sorta mislead me for a second, but afterwards... damn that's cool. ^^ Sounds like something my character, Jian, would do. I think. :p
     
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    ~ Zack ~, Aug 22, 2002
  7. Bloodberry

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    hehehe it really isn't what you think at all...but, i'll leave my thoughts out of here...and to continue with a little bit more...i edit the first post.
     
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    Bloodberry, Aug 23, 2002
  8. Nephilim_X

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    Heh heh. That was interesting! Some good descriptions. Keep it up!:D



    yeah, I am a madman...
     
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    Nephilim_X, Sep 21, 2002
  9. keence

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    cool whose the guy.

    did he really piss you off in another life?
    or is he just the new victim of the week?

    what should i think when your torturing so guy?
     
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    keence, Oct 16, 2002
  10. LiLd3vil4u

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    ....this sounds like something from cool devices, but you say its something different...is she stuffing a turkey? :D
     
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    LiLd3vil4u, Oct 17, 2002
  11. Bloodberry

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    heheh it's just interesting now, to sit back and see what ppl think it's about...and only otaru would find it evocative. lol *^-^* prrr...

    like i said, it's not what you think. the ppl in it aren't real. the, the concept behind it all is real, if you think so.
     
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    Bloodberry, Oct 17, 2002
  12. GenericHero5

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    Gutting a fish, or a home made histerectomy.
     
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    GenericHero5, Oct 30, 2002
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    a (particularly bad) surgeon @ work? i cant figure it...hey, r u gonna tell us eventually? coz i mean, to think of all the possibilities would be just...:dizzy2:...oooo...man, that's still creepy any way u think about it!
     
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  14. Bloodberry

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    hehe since i seem to have ppl thinking it's about some fishmonger, or butcher, or something, i should FINALLY clarify it.
    it's simply talking about expressing yourself, the bad version of it, but hey. but no one ever said you had to physically act out. i was writing this when i was working with the one person i truely hate(for the moment, until he gets fired) and that was getting my negetive emotions out. sooo, it's simply my personality hurting him with out doing anything.*^-^* doesn't it make ya feel warm and fuzzy all over knowing the sick crap i like? lol it justifies me liking nasty crime scene photos...
     
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    Bloodberry, Nov 4, 2002
  15. ki-ateral

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    "o wow"

    o wow that was disterbing i was told that i needed sicitrist whith how i diskribed dieing in a bomb in my book but that was nothing compared to this



    :bleed: :bleed: :bleed: :glazed: :bleed: :bleed: :bleed:
     
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    ki-ateral, Nov 7, 2002
  16. Bloodberry

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    hehe just because someone thinks you need a psychiatrist, doesn't mean anything. *^-^* i think it's a healthy outlet. or do you think it would be better to try and get off with murder charges?lol
     
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    Bloodberry, Nov 8, 2002
  17. Little Washu

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    :D LOL:D
     
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    Little Washu, Nov 8, 2002
  18. LiLd3vil4u

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    hmmm interesting. I agree with it being a healthy outlet. I write to get rid of the destructive side of my concious. Its a happy way to deal with things.
     
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    LiLd3vil4u, Nov 9, 2002

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