Creative Writing Journey to Fire's Keep

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  1. Baphijmm

    Baphijmm Kunlun Knight

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    http://www.angelfire.com/oh4/grady/works/journey.html/

    This is the intro to a story I have entitled Journey to Fire's Keep. Please tell me what you think of it. I have the first seven chapters done, but would like to see how it looks to some people other than myself.
     
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    Baphijmm, Mar 14, 2003
  2. Thin Yume

    Thin Yume New Member

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    wow very nice. i have a few pieces but they haven't been typed out yet.
     
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    Thin Yume, Mar 14, 2003
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    Cunning Servant New Member

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    Such a strange relationship this family has :).... This will make the story all the more interesting. I will enjoy reading it as it develops further.

    By the way, a concert baritone... in a marching band? Any particular reason why?
     
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    Cunning Servant, Mar 15, 2003
  4. Thin Yume

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    where the heck did you read that?
     
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    Thin Yume, Mar 15, 2003
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    Baphijmm Kunlun Knight

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    It was also within the website. I play concert baritone because I used to play trumpet, but my lips were too big to work on such a small mouthpiece and still produce sound.
     
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    Baphijmm, Mar 16, 2003
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    well that makes sense now. well then i guess all three of us play now don't we?
     
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    Thin Yume, Mar 17, 2003

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