!!!!Kenshin Fan Fiction!!!!

hey all, I just finished writing some Kenshin fancfiction cos its my favourite anime of all time and I love the characters ^-^

At the moment I have alot written but here is a sample of it to show you all. If you all like it I will post more stories! ^_=


He watched impatiently as she started to undress. There was something a bit wicked about what he was doing, but he didn't care. She untied her indigo-colored top from the front, slipping out of its looseness easily. What she was wearing, Sanosuke had never seen before. The long rose-colored inner kimono was perfectly made to her, tapering softly at her waist and extending down past her calves. He could easily see the curves of her body through the light-colored material, enough to bring him even closer to the window to see more clearly.

Allowing her remaining garments to fall to the floor, Megumi looked down at well-proportioned body. Her body had been through so much as she grew up, having the scars to prove it. She had a cross scar just above her left breast from when she was in Aizu. It was a constant reminder of her lost parents. She ran a fingertip over the faint scars, remembering.

Meanwhile, Sanosuke took in the opposite view, Megumi's delectable rear. He was speechless at what he was seeing, totally consumed with Megumi's visage. She was beautiful, he thought. Her straight, proud back stood tall, its smooth expanse flowing delicately toward the small of her back. Her small waist gently flared into ample hips. He couldn't keep his eyes off her buttocks, wanting to reach out and touch her himself. This was a side of Megumi he never expected to see that night. Sanosuke smiled softly, watching her don her night clothes. Obviously it wasn't the first time she'd spent the night alone at the clinic. He turned away from the window, urging his aroused body to calm.

"Megumi. . ." he whispered to himself, shaking his head. It was time to go home. Any more views like that, and he'd have to go inside and take care of Megumi himself. Sanosuke walked past the first window, returning to the main street.

As he did that, Megumi had turned around just in time to see someone passing the window. She gasped, wondering who could be watching her. It seemed like the person was gone, but who could it have been? She closed her eyes, replayed the moment in her mind.

"Sanosuke?" she slowly realized, remembering the spiky hair and bandanna. "He was. . . .watching. . . ."

 

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Thats real quality Lex! I like the way you were able to capture the characthers perfectly..most fanfics of this type seem to deviate from the originals. You can really feel the love in that piece.

Keep them coming

 

Thanx n8! I have alot more where this came from, and for the fans it gets more hot and steamy!!

 

Wow lex_diamonds thats amazingly good! I could almost imagine it was me outside the window watching the girls firm body. I hope you post more in the future ^_^ V

 

LOL Lex_diamonds! ^@^ still megumi eh? I mean , come on liek ....



I definitely would

 

I really hate to have to tell you this in front of everyone, and I apologize. But do not say that others works are your own!!!

What you posted is part of Kyoko Takara's Sabishii Kokoro -- Part 1 [Adult Romance], someone I know did a bit of a search to find this. http://www.nabiki.com/nichan/archive/Authors/KyokoTakara/sabishii1.txt

 

ElMarco packs up his stuff and dallys off before the police get here.

 

I knew it wasnt his just by reading the title of the thread

 

well done that guy!!!! You really showed me!!!
Hahahah, im all red now.

But anyway, why are you a fan of sad fan fiction for losers?

 

But anyway, why are you plagiarizing like a loser?

-UK
~~~~~~~
one man's trash is another man's treasure, but theft is still a crime.

 

LOL, I cut and pasted.
Anyway, the point was to try and annoy some Kenshin loyalists and those who get in a tizzy when Mary Jane shows her bare forearm in public.

 

I'm not even going to argue with you man, but I won't let you plagiarize others works in the forum Zanza and I mod. Nor will I allow you to annoy people here either...