Creative Writing Kouga Yuugi, Volume 1 (The Alternate Play)

Kougo Yuugi, Volume 1 (The Alternate Play)

Here are the details on my fic. I'll post the first chapter as soon as I get a reply. It's too big to be placed in the same post as the introduction.


MODERN MINNESOTA AND ANCIENT CHINA

This story will be using ideas from Yuu Watase's work Fushigi Yuugi. Yuu Watase's ideas came from old Chinese romantic stories. I will also be combining this story with my own ideas, so it won't be a complete clone of the official series.

The main character of our story, Chimou, is high school student. He is a young boy who has many conflicts with his family. He has been known for running away a few times; however, he lives in the country and is always forced to turn back at some point. It's not that Chimou is a bad kid, he is rather just misunderstand by everyone. Plus, he has five older brothers and sisters to compete with. He lives in a small Minnesotian town--Minnesota is in the United States, for those who don't know.

As previously stated, Yuu Watase studied the anicent Chinese stories that made Fushigi Yuugi what it was. The magical book in this story is the English translation of the Universe of the Four Gods, based on Chinese literature like The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. This story is based off of the Fushigi Yuugi manga. A lot of the characters are of Yuu Watase's creation. Though I plan on adding a few as I go along--other than Chimou. By reading--or watching--Fushigi Yuugi, one can clearly understand the genius that is Yuu Watase.


CHARACTERS

Chimou Jirardesu
Age: 16
Sex: Male
An overly kind and clumsy boy with a troubling home life.

Shannon Omlet
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Chimou's best friend. He helps keep Chimou from knocking into things on occassions.

Mia Jirardesu
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Chimou's sister. She lives for making Chimou's life a nightmare; though she used to be his best friend.

Tamahome
Age: 17
Sex: Male
A greedy, yet handsome, boy from ancient China

Hotohori
Age: 19
Sex: Male
The emporer of a suffering kingdom in ancient China.

Nuriko
Age: 18
Sex: Male
A beautiful crossdresser with incredible strength.


Edit: Okay, I got impatient and was going to post chapter one in a reply and risk a spam. It turns out that there were still too many words! Well, I uploaded them for you guys to read--if you're even paying attention to this thread.

Kougo Yuugi, Chapter 1

Kougo Yuugi, Chapter 2

Kougo Yuugi, Chapter 3 NEW!

Edit: Yes, I know that the files look goofy in your browser. Simply download the file and open it with NotePad. Make sure you have word wrap on.

 

I'm taking the first chapter home to read... first thoughts... mind your tenses... you're not consistent in past or present writing. I'll be back with more meaningful commentary once I've read the whole chapter (maybe both)

-UK

 

Yeah, someone at ff.net already told me that in a review. On the secon chapter I watched it more closely. I'll be working on the third chapter tonight. Also, pardon my typos, I'm currently on an iMac at chool and it doesn't let you you go back and change it.

 

I read both chapters and I like how it is going... But those spelling errors... Well thats beside the point, it looks great and has potential to become a awesome Fanfic! I look forward to the next installment

 

Chapter three is up and humming for those who actually read this fan fiction.

 

i loved the story. its really good i really like the twist of were the priestess is actually a guy! hehe thats so cute. also i have a question. how could a story hum?