Creative Writing Lie

Lie

i sit and look at what you've done with your life,
i need no story...cause it all is a lie.
i rip the pictures off my wall
it's so hard to believe it all.

i tear out the pages where your name is written in ink...
and i start to wonder and i start to think.
what if i had never did what i did,
would i still be yours or would i be up for bid.

time is something that we cannot change,
but i still hate the way it was all rearranged.
i was wrong it is not alright,
it will never be cause it's all just a lie.

i know what she's doing, that shouldn't be done...
in the end it will add up that again she won.
i have lived defeat too many times,
but if she really loves you...it's all just a lie.


that took a load off me!!! i know it stinks really bad but at least i tried^_^

 

Hey I loved that...I just wrote one too but no one replied to it*boo*Well
they song under your sig is called Concrete Angel ain't it?I knew it!I luv that song!

 

A Rainbow of Insanity

I brush off the burns
and start to remember what i've learned.
nothing could ever be,
a rainbow of insanity.

I look toward the sky
wondering why i didn't die.
you tried your best to make me ill,
and told me that you would kill.

but like i said, somethings will never be,
a rainbow of insanity.
i walk down the dark street,
wondering why you'd do this to me.
you claimed 'true love' and i believed you,
but for long we did not stay as two.

You broke all the rules
and expected me to play the fool.
you beat me with your tools
but you will drown in death's pools.
and mabey, all things can be,
a rainbow of insanity.


whoa! i like this one!

 

Oooh. I like both of them. Yes. They are well done!

 

they are both sugoi!

good job Kagome_Akari! couldn't have written it better^_^

 

thats really good!!! i guess you like writting poetry , so do i a fellow creative writer yah!!!! cant wait to see more of your work!!!

 

Nice and very deep. Keep it up.

 

Good job! Keep up the good work sis!

 

When i am alone

When i am alone, there is no one there
and i'm dancing with the air.
When i am alone, i put stress on a shelf
and i talk to my self.
When i am alone, i feel like bloom has taken place
and i have my own empty space.

But when i am alone, stoping is going
and the wind can stop blowing.
When i am alone, i am afraid to try it
so i keep myself quiet.
When i am alone, to this place people race
and they take up my space.


thanks everybody for liking them! i like this one too!