Creative Writing Life to the Limits

This poem was written 2 days ago. Dedicated to my moron mother and sister,
who needs to live their OWN lives. lol I know i'm kinda annoyed this morning

Life Has No Limits

In life you'll have many questions
and along the line even more suggestions
just how you should act
or when you can or cannot laugh
we have only one life
some people spend it doing things "right"
All trying to get to a higher height
to look more mighty in god's eyes
my hat off to you
if you think somethings wrong with what i do
but who are you to say?
that i'm going the wrong way?
you can be a freek
be a juvenile delinquit like me in the streets
or work hard towards what you want to be
no worries here, your life's not up to me
if the world was how i say
and you could live your life any way
we'd have less wanting to fight back
and more all layed back
god gave us a voice
and the world gives us a choice
and we happen to live in it
so live life to the limits

 

~Blue~,your poem is absolutly beutiful,your poems are so good! I hope you write more.I'll be looking forward to your next poem.

 

That was good! I'll try to look for more of your poems when they come up. Hope the next poem is as good or better than the first. God Bless.

 

I must say you did a brilliant job with this one. Your writting keeps on getting better and better. There is a nice and clear message behind this one.