Art Lineart--1st stage of a WIP

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  1. Fascination

    Fascination New Member

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    Could you give me some C&Cs on this? I want to make sure everything's okay before I colour it. ^_^
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    Thanks!
     
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    Fascination, Apr 30, 2004
  2. SaberJ2X

    SaberJ2X Moderator
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    son... you first have to post something so we can comment and critique :)
    we would love to give you comments
     
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    SaberJ2X, Apr 30, 2004
  3. Fascination

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    But I did! Could you not see it? :confused:

    If you couldn't, click here.
     
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    Fascination, Apr 30, 2004
  4. SaberJ2X

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    holy molly.. that\'s really some sick work :D 3 thumbs up
     
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    SaberJ2X, Apr 30, 2004
  5. scare

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    very cool! you should colour it! i really like the clean lineart and the characters ^_^. it needs colouringgg~
     
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    scare, Apr 30, 2004
  6. Rem

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    Ohhh man, not another awsomely better artist than me v_v. Seriously, that is awesome, colour it!!!!. *stares at the bishis* I love the way you got the bodys to do that, very pro. Im at deviant art too, user name Emphiria, gunna go watch you.

    xx
     
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    Rem, May 1, 2004
  7. Spiggy

    Spiggy Freak of Nature

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    wow! :eek: it's brilliant
    we demand colour!!!
     
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    Spiggy, May 1, 2004
  8. toeskater91

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    some of the best work i have seen.
    can't wait for color.
     
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    toeskater91, May 8, 2004
  9. Ciel

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    the girl with the long hair on the right, her torso and arm seem too short for the size of her head..I'm not sure if she is a ghost too? but still your work is great and I really like how the two guys were drawn,the main character especially.
     
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    Ciel, May 8, 2004
  10. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    looks great :O
    nice!!! loved the gurl with freckles!!! :blush2:
    color it!!! :anime: :anime:
     
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    Sen, May 10, 2004
  11. Tanuki

    Tanuki the wizzard of oz

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    smooth. ^_^. love the lanky guy in the foreground. great style. can't wait to see colour. the only thing is i feel it gets a bit 'out' as the pic goes down, like the legs are a bit too long and thin maybe?.
     
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    Tanuki, May 10, 2004
  12. Dante

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    I get this strange Scooby-Doo meets Casper The Friendly Ghost Goes To Japan Special kind of feel when I look at this picture.

    Not sure if it's a good thing or a bad thing. o_O;

    It's a good pic, though.
     
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    Dante, May 10, 2004

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