Art Living Legend RAVE ~(my manga)~

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  1. PorPor Coro

    PorPor Coro New Member

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    This is the first page, if u couldnt follow it.....the girl is getting surgically implanted with a device enabling her to use this weapon that can morph into anything. She's an asassin now. So yea...more pages with more posts
     
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    PorPor Coro, Aug 21, 2003
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    your art reminds me of Jhonen Vasquez's art.

    its nice. though i cant read it, its good. i know i can never have the patience to draw a bed, or the floor, or the environment. -_- im too lazy.
     
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    + annovachan +, Aug 21, 2003
  3. DarkNd Destiny

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    Great!!

    Looks really cool!

    :)
     
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    DarkNd Destiny, Aug 21, 2003
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    Looks really, really well drawn.. though you spelled "assassins" wrong, both in the picture and in your post. ^^;; Strangely enough, you spelled it different each time. :p Story sounds like something that's heard quite often, though, as I said, really good job on the art.
     
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  5. PorPor Coro

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    Rundown of this page: some guy high political guy is leaving a club and in ambushed by the asassin girl. RAVE tries to save him by hitting her with his car ^-^
     
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    PorPor Coro, Aug 22, 2003
  6. Ciel

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    I think your writing is really cute :p but maybe you can type in what is written at the bottom of each drawing? if thats possibly unconfusing.
    and is your other manga still going? or am I hallucinating that you have another one ... haha.

    anyways your manga layout is quite interesting and highly detailed, its beautiful.
     
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    Ciel, Aug 22, 2003
  7. FireDragon_16

    FireDragon_16 A Sionbosys Unit

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    GOD..KILL ME IF IM WRONG.......... PorPor Coro ... you just got a nother fan :p
    Nice JOB, really good !! damn it....
    But about the story ...i dont really understand what is goin on ....
     
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    FireDragon_16, Aug 22, 2003
  8. PorPor Coro

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    ^-^ ok ok , the first page it features a girl in a hospital room. she is stabilized for surgery and is wheeled into a special OR. Then she is implanted with the thing in her head that enables her to manage the coat she wears that can morph into stuff. Second panel takes you to where since now she is an asassin(sp?) her first job of killing a political official. She is about to kill him when RAVE (the main character) comes and saves him. Rave was a bodyguard and helped him out. In this page he sucessfully gets him away although is left with a painful reminder not to interfere with her anymore.

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    PorPor Coro, Aug 22, 2003
  9. FireDragon_16

    FireDragon_16 A Sionbosys Unit

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    LOL...sounds formiliar... like the TERMINATOR =P I'll BE BACK!!!
     
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    FireDragon_16, Aug 23, 2003
  10. PorPor Coro

    PorPor Coro New Member

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    yea, what? terminator? nothing to due with the future or robots ^-^" or time travel...
     
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    PorPor Coro, Aug 24, 2003
  11. Tetsuo

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    Nice work!
    Allthough its a bit hard to read...confusing somehow. Maybe too much detail :p i dunno..anyway, keep it up..its great.
     
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    Tetsuo, Aug 24, 2003
  12. FireDragon_16

    FireDragon_16 A Sionbosys Unit

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    HMmm what i meant was....... IT(the girl uses the DEVICE) CAN MORF into anything..almost sound like the enemy terminator in terminator 2?
     
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    FireDragon_16, Aug 24, 2003
  13. PorPor Coro

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    OOOO, i know wat u mean, but its like her coat that can morph, she cant herself
     
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    PorPor Coro, Aug 24, 2003
  14. FireDragon_16

    FireDragon_16 A Sionbosys Unit

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    OWH...now its like "SPAWN" the movie? lol
    hehehe .. its nice work really...i really like WATCHING ANIME more than reading manga!
     
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    FireDragon_16, Aug 25, 2003

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