Art Look my newest drawing... *i'm tired* ^_^

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by SaberJ2X, Oct 5, 2002.

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Is it good?

  1. IT SUCKZ, GO TO DRAWING SCHOOL!!!!

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  2. IT'S OK... I GUESS...

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  3. IT'S GRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!

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  1. SaberJ2X

    SaberJ2X Moderator
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    I did this for a significant other...
    P.S. I'm working on the one u gave me sachiko...
     

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    SaberJ2X, Oct 5, 2002
  2. Sachiko

    Sachiko happy SMJ shoujo ^_^

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    Cool!!! It's really tight!! Bloodberry sure looks muscular :D But you forgot her lipstick XD, and perhaps you can add some shine on her hair too XD. But still, I can never color as good as you +_+ btw, thanks for the small tutoring!!!
     
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    Sachiko, Oct 5, 2002
  3. That guy!

    That guy! Expecting Father

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    wow... that's really great, and very close to how the original animated Bloodberry looks too :D Awesome job!! ^^
     
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    That guy!, Oct 5, 2002
  4. thunder dragon

    thunder dragon dragon king

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    its really good..the coloring is great..
    good work SaberJ2X..
     
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    thunder dragon, Oct 5, 2002
  5. luvweaver

    luvweaver Ad Jesum per Mariam

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    Very well done!

    OK now the tips :D

    1) The skin tone looks yellowish. (You can grab a snapshot and sample the colors from there)

    2) The ponitail, it still doesn't look natural.

    3) Her breasts are *just a bit* too small for her measurements.

    4) Her torso, it could be about 20 or 30% larger.

    But otherwise, very well done! :)
     
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    luvweaver, Oct 5, 2002
  6. Tiger Girl

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    cool pic SaberJ2X:)... the colors are good but you need to work little on it to make it better:D...
     
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    Tiger Girl, Oct 8, 2002
  7. DrunkLeprachaun

    DrunkLeprachaun Tetsu Oushi

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    Damn that's fine. Screw the begrudgers, they're just jealous 'cause they can't draw as well as you. I think it's very short on flaws, the only major one being the absence of her lipstick, but that's not fatal. I actualy think this is better than some of the official SMJ art(see SMJ collection 1 DVD cover, tut).
     
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    DrunkLeprachaun, Oct 9, 2002
  8. Sachiko

    Sachiko happy SMJ shoujo ^_^

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    If in general you like Bberry in JtoX better than in J for how she looks, then you'll probably think so. SaberJ2X's art is a model of her JtoX form :p
     
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    Sachiko, Oct 10, 2002
  9. Yuna

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    Woow! like the coloring! :)
    Well done.... ;.; sniiff sniff you go gurl! ;)
     
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    Yuna, Oct 10, 2002
  10. SaberJ2X

    SaberJ2X Moderator
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    Yuna... What do you mean by "GO GURL!"?
    I'm a "man"
     
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    SaberJ2X, Oct 10, 2002
  11. Izzy

    Izzy moo. moo. moo!
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    It's teh good stuff, alright. Nice Flash work there. :) Y'see, I can commend on rival programs as well! :D I agree with Luv only on the torso part, but only because it's too short. Then again, so is Lime's in SMJ, ANYWAY. :D And I always *did* think BB (not your friendly mod) looked better without lipstick. Sometimes, I just look at it like she didn't put the bottom part of her lips on. :D

    Dammit all, with all this nice art, I should try my hand at it!!! :mad:
     
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    Izzy, Oct 11, 2002
  12. Bau

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    thats great how did you make it all shiny like that???
    was that on the computer?
    its bloodberry from SMJ right.

    looks great
    i give it 2 KUPO's up (10/10) on mog's art scale
     
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    Bau, Nov 9, 2002
  13. evilmutantman

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    holy hole in a donut!!

    woah!! did u use a wacom, or sum sorta drawin tablet? n wat version of flash did u use?? i mean, coz, woah! (im still workin on my vocab, sorry) WOAH!!
     
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    evilmutantman, Nov 9, 2002
  14. Larissa

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    Good job!
    I don't see anything wrong with it.
    It's cute, I like it!
    :)
     
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    Larissa, Nov 10, 2002
  15. Mika-chan

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    WOW! So cool! I wish I could do that! *is a hyper anime fan now. NOTE: I am a lot like Quetre when he has his 'special tea'.*^^;
     
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    Mika-chan, Nov 10, 2002
  16. Bloodberry

    Bloodberry Bloody Berry
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    the original drawing is quite nice. the expression is a little unnatural for her, but hey. <shrugs> fan interpretation there. personally, i like the smj style over jtox...
     
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    Bloodberry, Nov 10, 2002
  17. kapitanbar

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    Awesome pic!

    I can say that you're improving your technique. I like a lot the bloodberry you've drawn.
     
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    kapitanbar, Nov 10, 2002
  18. keence

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    wow I wish I could draw like that!
    Its great and has great color keep drawing!
     
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    keence, Nov 13, 2002
  19. SaberJ2X

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    Thankz

    1)i'm using Flash6
    2)thankz 4 the critics
    3)i forgot a few things...
    4)there will be an update
    5)i'm busy it may not be soon
    6)no pressure sensitive tablet, my hand for the original
    and my trusty intellipoint mouse(not optical)

    you all can draw like me it's just a matter of mood,
    i was thinking of my girl-friend while drawing it
    (made it for her) maybe that's why i got so nice
     
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    SaberJ2X, Nov 13, 2002
  20. Sol

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    Great work you have there. All the colors are bright and stand out. Not to mention the shading was also weel done.
     
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    Sol, Nov 18, 2002
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