Art lost on a one way street #2

http://www.deviantart.com/view/1770979

lol.. maybe i could have like a whole series of this? =_=;;;
anyways... another CG.. go me ^_^

i don't really like her skirt.. it looks... augh i don't know, but it really pisses me off lol~ like something is wrong with it.. but i'm really bad at folds so i couldn't make it right. also her arms are a bit.. long ^^; muahaha.. but i think it's not that bad? i spent more than 6 hours on this (half the time i was playing online cards with my friend at the same time so yeah.. =_ i think it's pretty good for me ^^

 

oo..thats good. the hat thing is so hot. the arm is quite long, skinny and stretched out, but other than that its good. the colors your use are so great and fit it perfectly. gives it a rustic, mellow, laid back feeling. nice.

 

I love it, that is a nice piece of work. The colors fit perfectly with each other and the whole picture has a "soft, relaxed" feeling to it. The skirt is (in my opinion) nicely done. You can look at it as a "new style" or something.

BTW, is that psy-duck (from pokemon in case I spelled the name wrong)?

 

i like the colours u use in your cg's. they're really soft and transperant

 

Cool! nice and simple! keep it up!

 

Looks good reminds me of a wierd ol 1980's vampire horror movie lol giant chicken head but I love the picture very unique.

Btw 1980 vampire movies kick the most ***

 

Sai, if you think the legs are too long, actually they could be just right by taking in the fact that they are closer to the viewer. Plus her shoes are big too, so we can just say it's a perspective/distortion thing. Likewise, sometimes when I draw a person full-bodied, I make it so that it's like the viewer is eye-level with my character... thus I make the legs a lil short and make them recede just a lil. It's too bad most people don't understand perspective, and end up drawing legs too long on purpose.

The coloring is very nice, pretty idealistic/surrealistic.

 

Very nice, except the forearm. However, it really isn't a glaring mistake, and needed to be pointed out before I even noticed. However, you might want to pick up an anatomy book to study the ratios of arm lengths, sketching out of anatomy books is one of the best ways to learn how to fix things like that. Everything else in the picture looks very good though.

ps - Not trying to be harsh, just constructive criticism, it's already way better than I can draw

- Ark

 

its great... i especiallly love the shoes. there al big and stuff... hehe- keep it up!

 

thank you everyone for comments ^^

lol~ a few people thought it was psy-duck ^^; nup it's not.. actually it was meant to be a bird but i don't usually draw animals so.. it came out like a duck -.-

ehehe thanks for that ^_^ i have lotsa problems with perspectives and poses X_X; it's cos i always draw girls just standing there doing nothing ^^;

lol~ dw! ^^ actually i should thank you for the criticism.. this board gives really good advices and comments ^^ i love~