Creative Writing Love's sake

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  1. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    I made this peom some time ago in the month to the person I love and we decided to put it up here. She's also on BJP and her name is mention at the end of this peom. Enjoy.

    Love’s sake​


    I look for you in my life…and in my dreams,
    I want to see you again, to hold you tight,
    To not let go and get things right,
    But each time I try, I break your heart…and I break my.

    Looking for these words is just not easy,
    To show I love you in my heart,
    To let you know who I am inside,
    I want you with me until I die.

    A full moon’s light shines on my soul,
    Not saying much but showing you my heart,
    With this love I have in my heart,
    Why can’t we love each other for just love’s sake?

    I’m looking for this love,
    One that loves me,
    Not for my looks and money,
    But to love me for what’s inside of me.

    I look for this love inside this world,
    Hitting dead ends where ever I go,
    I try so hard to make things right,
    But all I do is make it worse.

    All that I’ve asked,
    All that’s seen me,
    All whose gone past this shell of me,
    All that are friends see me only as that.

    Even though I love someone from the bottom of my heart,
    Giving you my all and wanting to be loved back,
    I look past your own shell with this love inside of me,
    I see you as my true love but do you see me as that too?​

    The woman I love is named Yukiko. She was InuyashaROCKS but she changed her name to Yukiko.
     
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  2. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    That was cute. ^_^
     
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