Creative Writing Me gonna post some stories (some short, one big)

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  1. Rebos

    Rebos New Member

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    Hope yor comment my stories and chapters that is written by me and a friend....
    ps: look at this pic of me Rebos...
     

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  2. Rebos

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    Mu date...

    Rebos Date
    Written by Player of Doom and Red (me part of him)

    Warech, Thallus and Rebos is wandering through a big city, Suddenly Rebos noticed someone...a girl. He stops and thinks It's a girl? Or is it a boy? I think the girls are the ones who are pretty...or was it boys? I think it was girls. And since that person are pretty it must mean that its a GIRL!
    He walks towards the pretty girl and stops in front of her, he open his mouth and speaks: "Date?"
    "1th of June, 5387"
    "Date?"
    "1th of June, 5387"
    "Date?"
    "1th of June, 5387"
    "Date?"
    "I've alredy told you the date, unknown humanoid."
    "Date?"
    "That is enough, unknown humanoid."
    "Date?"
    "Are you malfunctioning? Do you need an upgrade?"
    "Date?"
    "Exit this section, unknown humanoid, before I call guard-Drones."
    "Date?"
    "GUARD-DRONES!"

    "...where's Rebos? Thallus, where is he?"
    Thallus looks after Rebos, but there's no sign of him.
    "I thought he was right behind us..."
    "Not again." Warech sighs.
    "Aaaargh! Not again! Can't we just leave him where he is?!"
    "..."

    "Date?"
    "Can I hit him before he's disposed off?"
    "Permission granted." the drones replied with their computerized voice.
    "Permission to what? The Date?"
    <SLAM! SMACK! BONK!>
    "Oooow! Love hurts?"
    The drones puts a tractorbeam onto Rebos.
    "Huh? Can't I have a date?"
    "..."

    The End

    Afterword from me Rebos: Wonder what I did wrong, why couldnt I get a date?
    Afterword from Alisha: Cuz you stupid, silly!
     
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  3. Kirei na kimyou

    Kirei na kimyou New Member

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    Aww, not this one :p
    Hehe, well, it's kindof funny if you get it, though.
     
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    Kirei na kimyou, Mar 10, 2003
  4. Rebos

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    Why is not someone commenting this thread? *sniff*:sad:
    Shall I not post the bigger story?
    :sweat2:
     
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    Rebos, Mar 17, 2003
  5. Kirei na kimyou

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    'Cuz no one likes it :D !!!!!!!
     
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    Kirei na kimyou, Mar 17, 2003
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    ...

    ...not true!:eek:
     
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    Rebos, Mar 17, 2003
  7. Thin Yume

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    i might have to agree with her alittle. i thought it was cute and all but there really was no point. sorry.
     
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    Thin Yume, Mar 17, 2003
  8. Rebos

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    This story is just a example story, the BIG story is much better...
    So me is going to post it some day...:) :)
     
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    Rebos, Mar 18, 2003

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