Creative Writing Mind and Soul

Emerald flame in the confused mind,
twilight star in the emerald sky.
Soul's passion knows no bounds,
the breeze in ice of emerald passion.

Work on the mind takes its toll,
working hard until it falls.
Soul in honor in passing soul,
those who dead be born and grow.

The mind in time of growing hours,
free the mind bound by lies.
Pain in the soul in emerald lies,
torn from sin, heat and mind.

Peaceful mind in peaceful sky,
turn the war of passion and lies.
Flaming soul that fills the night,
thoughts go by when sin dies.

Echoed thoughts of the worried mind,
troubled news fades in night.
The thoughts of many fill the air,
rain falls of mind and soul.

 

What can I say other then that I love it? I see some deeper meaning behind it. Like for instance reincarnation.

 

It is an awsome poem!! I liked it alot. The way you put your words together makes it even better.

 

Great, I never can write deep poems..just really rebellious and emO poems ^^ Awesome work