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This was from last week, new art Kenji and Color Dra, so tell me what you think.

 

the colour choice fopr the sword in the 1st one was interesting... kind of looks like a light-saber ^^.
the detail in the 2nd one is good. i can tell you spent a while on that one.

 

nice work.
in the first one you did a good job with the coloring.
in the second pic the wings are too huge but good and nice hair. :anime:

 

thanks! :anime: I do my best!!! :sweat2:

 

They are very good. I like your pencil colour shading and the second one is my fav. I love the wings how do you draw wings like that?

 

Thanks!! :anime: And the wings take lots of practice :sweat2:

 

Yo, Kenji
Some Oppinions from a fellow artist.

The first one I have to say the wings look too flat... you could make it look more solid by making it look like their were bones and/or muscles in those wings
The arms don't look natural, they are stiff and stuck out... maybe you should just leave the arms down?
The hair looks... amaturish :anime: maybe you could make the hair more unique by not lineing up rows of the same straind of hair.

Your second pic looks, rigid and square... you could fix it by adding a curve to his shoulders and making his arm longer. The wings are good... but there are better pictures of wings out there, the feathers look to fat... maybe you could thin them up a bit?

I'm not making fun of your picture I just wanna let you know what I think, don't get mad at me :sweat:

 

well i'v done it, i fixed the wings and i colord the thing, but i like the hair style too much to change it :sweat2:

 

nice works, kenji~ i likey both of them, and the kenji with wings definitely looks better in colours~ yay!

 

heres a new pic i made

 

please don't double post! just edit them - it makes it easier for people to read and you get to say everything you want in one go :anime:

oh, and your last pic was very good, i especially like the reflections in the sword. very nicely done!

 

nice work i liked the last one the best, keep it up.

 

First Picture:

The only thing I can find half-decent in this picture is probably the sword. Although it is missing the detail near the point. The wings are horribly misshapen and it would more than likely be impossible for them to not only move decently but to be able to fly with them as it looks as if they lack any real skeletal structure (which is bad). The exaggeration of the hair is rather absurd, judging from the length of it and suggested thickness that would also make it more difficult for him to fly, not to mention even move. I hope he doesn't trip over his black and blue obi/belts, that would be rather embarassing. All I can see with this one.


Second Picture:

Another problem with the wings... set aside the fact of them being rather poorly drawn, they are much too bulky and they look more like the form of a turkey's wings, only slightly mutilated. The feathers are much too large and that would make it much more difficult to use them, not to mention the weight would probably break his back and spine and judging from the side of his body I'm surprised they aren't ripped from his shoulderblades when he stands. The character himself.. well.. meh. Anyway, do something with your proportions and especially your wings.

 

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well i guess ill just quit sints i have no reason to draw any more............(last post ever)