Fan Art My Chi Drawing. . . . .

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  1. Jaken

    Jaken Coin Locker Baby

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    What to you think of my drawing of Chi from Chobbits. Does it look like her? I want critisism. . . .but friendly -_- ^o^ would apreciate some tips and pointers! Thanks. There are some things i did different in my drawing, then in the pic.

    Chi222 is the real picture (what my drawing should look like >_>)
    and the other is my drawing.
     

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  2. Zelgadis

    Zelgadis New Member

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    Just keep practicing, find your own path to which you should follow.
     
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  3. Ciel

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    so what's wrong with it?

    I love the image you drew from! I've seen only the Freya devil version. anyways, your drawing is really good. maybe work on teh head, give some more space on the right side (her left side) of her head. Her head also seems to big for her body. I love your use of line though ^__^ keep it up!
     
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  4. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    since its a copy you should pay more attention to details, remember, observation is everything. Observation and practice.

    its not bad but i suggest you do it again, i assure you itll be better, try it out :) :anime:
    good job with the clothing.
     
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  5. Zelgadis

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    You pointed it out for me.
     
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    When I first started drawing copying other works was all I ever did. I've copied so many DBZ pics that I can now drawn anything in the style any way I please. lol

    That's pretty good, the only booboo I spot for the most part is the head is a bit "wobbly" and large. I like how the dress is done.

    Good Work! ^_^
     
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  7. Sesshomisao

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    hey looks great...keep up the good work

    Misao
     
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  8. Jaken

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    Thank you for all your critiquing! i will use all of your advice. And i will redo it as you have suggested,Chejo, with detail and everything! :anime: Thanks alot everyone, i apriciate your honesty!
     
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  9. Tanuki

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    yeah it's a great pic and well done, the head is a little elongated, but a nice job.
     
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  10. sourcherriz

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    dats de koolest pic ive eva seen. itz in volumn 4 or5 i fink.
     
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    sourcherriz, Dec 10, 2003
  11. Nia

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    Cool!

    The face...u gotta work on da shape of da face...da hands are bit off too...But otherwise its great!!
     
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    Nia, Dec 19, 2003
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    the face is a tad on the long side and the hand a lil bit of position.. making them look... "broken"

    other than that fine piece of work...
    better than what I could have done
     
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    SaberJ2X, Dec 20, 2003
  13. Okami

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    its good. better that i could do


    man this place has changed since i was here last
     
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    Okami, Dec 20, 2003
  14. thunder dragon

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    really good

    just like what they said you need to work on the head (the ears one is bigger than the other and they look like there gonna fall put them little bit up,the hair:needs fixing not like the original pic,the face:the eyes are good but fix the eye brows),and work on the shoulders too ,other than that you did a good job.
     
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  15. sourcherriz

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    its still kewt. wen ur readin de manga u dun worrie so much abt de pics as long as the storie line iz good. but de pic iz perfect.
     
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    sourcherriz, Dec 21, 2003
  16. RaineR

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    its not bad, youve got the essentials like her hair and her clothes, but its all down to proportions, the head shouldnt be the biggest part of the picture and the hands are kinda thin.
    if you want to practice and improve your skills, i wouldnt copy since 8/10 of the time the artworks that you copy wont be in the style youd like, so it would be in best interest just too do quick sketches or doodles and like chejo said *observation and practice*
     
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  17. sourcherriz

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    it mite not b perfect but nofens perfect. itsh stiil good n dats all dat mattas.
     
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    sourcherriz, Dec 21, 2003
  18. Gabrielle

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    not really like the original but very close. although the face look longer but its fine if u don compare it. but the hand(the one behind the other) look a bit too short.
     
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