Creative Writing My Felonious Eyes

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  1. Engel

    Engel New Member

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    [ My Felonious Eyes ]

    Shadows singing a song, the sound so suffocating
    Shrieks of pleasure, shrieks of pain
    Flames dancing around them, the world falling to ashes

    White faces with blank expressions
    Writhering away, the past left behind
    Walking away, within the endless nights
    Falling behind, They're falling behind

    Division of the good and bad, find the place where you belong
    Death follows closely behind, within the depths of Hell
    Dance the night away, keep dancing the night away, towards the end of time
    Freely, I will express the pleasure within me, X myself from the world

    Cursed, I'm cursed, I say, I'm cursed, I am no Angel
    Demonic I am, can you not see it within these eyes?
    Darkened with no expression, undefined, uncherished
    Do you see my past, the one within these eyes, my FeLoNiOuS eyes...
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    damn..that was good. Hey they was the best you ever wrote man! :D
     
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  3. Hitokiri Tenma

    Hitokiri Tenma New Member

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    i really loved this one. this really touched me on a personal level, no joke.
     
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