Art My first CG....

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  1. Icarus

    Icarus New Member

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    This is my first CG and this is my character Isaac. I got Pixia from the web and this is what I came up with....
    Comments please.

    Icarus

    Sorry about the poor-ish quality, I had to resize it for it to be posted...
     

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  2. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    Not bad at all. Next time remember to place some shadows to add volume.
     
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  3. Ciel

    Ciel Unoa Freak
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    his bottom half may need to be a bit longer and wider. but I love the colours! the character design is wonderful as well ^___^
     
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  4. Icarus

    Icarus New Member

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    Thanks for the criticism guys! I'll take that in mind when I'm next drawing and CGing (which will hopefully be soon...).

    Thanks, Icarus.
     
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  5. Kogarashi

    Kogarashi Summon of Wood

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    Not bad for a first cg. ^_^ Not bad at all. Looks much better than my first. ^_^;;;;

    C&C:
    The biggest anatomy issue I have has been addressed by Seraphim already, so I'll skip that.
    > Be sure not to include too many unneccessary lines, like on his torso and thighs. You don't need to show every muscle, especially if his clothing (like his shirt) isn't tight-fitting.
    > Don't be afraid to deepen shadows to give it depth. ^_^
    > Pick a light source at the start so you know which direction to place the shadows.
    > Maybe add a shadow under/behind him so he looks like he's not floating in space?
    >LOVE those eyes. ^_^ Best "first CG" eyes I've ever seen.
    >Love the color scheme. Great choices all.

    Nifty background, too. My first CG had the character standing on a "grassy field" (read: I put green under them) with a sky behind them (just a light blue field).

    Keep up the great work, and hope all your work only improves your skills. ^_^
     
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  6. Sesshomisao

    Sesshomisao Poison Girl

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    looks great...most of the critisim has already been handed out...so all's I will say is good job..keep practicing!!

    Misao
     
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  7. SaberJ2X

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    not bad for a begginer :)
    very consistent
    very detail
    very cool ^^
    thumbs up!
     
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  8. Stardust Phox

    Stardust Phox Such a Taurean I am!

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    All the criticism's been handed out. ^^; But yeah. The colors are GREAT.

    And you did it on Pixia, which I've yet to make work for me... x_o; Kudos, man. ^_^ It's GREAT for a first CG.
     
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