Art my first cg!

Ok.......It ain't bad but it looks kinda irregular in my opinion. Maybe you can improve it by maybe making his legs longer coz cloud has quite long legs. Definately make his buster sword about twice the length it has now. Maybe his hair a bit bigger if you know wat I mean, and tbh, the colour white doesn't really suit him . But nevertheless it's still a good attempt to draw the infamous 'Cloud'. I'm not criticising...I'm just pointing out things which may make it look better. Good luck on improving it if you intend to

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"To-tal slaughter... to-tal slaughter... I won't leave a single man alive. La la la loo la, genoci-i-ide. Lee lee loo lee loo, an ocean of blood. Let's be-gin the killing time!" - 'Quote' - Vash The Stampede

 

Well, if you have one 'ready' to show me then yeah, why not show me it. But if you had to draw one just to show me then don't bother coz I'm not here to judge pictures and bother people around in showing their drawings. I'm just here to advise on maybe how to improve or watever. So it's entirely up to you.

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"To-tal slaughter... to-tal slaughter... I won't leave a single man alive. La la la loo la, genoci-i-ide. Lee lee loo lee loo, an ocean of blood. Let's be-gin the killing time!" - 'Quote' - Vash The Stampede

 

the sword is too big & the boy is short and small & he dont look masculine enough to carry this heavy sword..
but its really good for a first cg Cloud..keep it up..