Art My first colored drawing

Here it is, my first ever colored drawing. Let me know what you think/suggestions.

 

It's quite good but... It doesn't look alive, and the toning is bad, the sword doesn't hav enough tones and the woman has too much tones...Oh my... The fingers and the skin looks weird... It's alrite tat it's ur first one, keep on improving...

 

Your first post here, MavadoX? I like the gradient coloring in her hair, but that's about it. It's pretty decent for a first colored drawing. The drop-shadow doesn't match, I feel.

 

For a first time I guess it's good ^^ It really doesnt look alive, the skin looks weird and so does the clothes. But it's still good.

Sorcyness