Manga My First Manga-Love & Heaven

OK...i just this manga or comic...jsut for fun...so yea...anywaz...yea....can you guys tell teh different between page 1 and 13??? :sweat2:
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Love & Heaven
Chapter 1
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Page 1 ~Page 2 ~Page 3 ~Page 4 ~Page 5 ~Page 6 ~Page 7 ~Page 8~Page 9 ~Page 10~Page 11~Page 12~Page 13~Page 14**NEW~Page 15**NEW

End of Chapter 1....

Chapter 2

Page 16~Page 17~Page 18**NEW**

To be continue............ :sweat2:
PIcture from Story
Toky & Kisha~Toky & Kisha Story(color)**neW!**


..To be continue..........
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basic summary

Kisha is a 16 years old gurl, who happen to be an after life of Venus...teh Goddess of love...hehehe...awnyaz...things are gettin kinda weird...cuz when i draw teh pix...things just kinda POp up in mah head and i just draw watever pop up...so if it doesn't make sense to u people...I'm srry...ahahah
~~~Basic history,
Long ago, in China. Somewhere in the Heavenly world...there's a goddess of love, but all teh others god And Goddesses called her Venus. She broke one of the Heave rule, by fallen inlove witha mortal guy. The queen personally liked Venus, so she let Venus have another chance, They both bet on if there is really love or not...The Queen said,
"In your next 3 lifes, you must find TRUe love, then you can stay on earth and have Internal life with your love one or you will have to go back to heaven, and promise never to Set foot on Earth Again!"
So then, Venus agreed!

for her last two life...she hasn't find any true love...and now...time is almost up...can she find her True love, before the Queen made her go back to heaven? read and Find out!( i unno how to put mah summary ...srry)

 

that's not bad. >_<. welcome to the boards too. it's hard to do a manga, with a story to worry about as well as the art. you need bg's as well. x_x. you're doing well, keep it up.^^

 

HHEHEHE!...yea it is hard :sweat2: ...if you look closely...i mess up on a lot of pages....hehehe....it's hard to keep the same characters and everthing...ARGG :anger2: ...hahahaimmma pu tup two last page of chapter 1 lateer...kekekek :sweat:

 

Moving over to manga.

- Teddz

 

o....srry....i didn't kno :blush2: ...i thought it's in art since i drew it andstuff...kekekeke :sweat2:

 

*gasp* Have you read "Red String"? xD This is just like it! Minus the dream stuff.

I love it. I love it! xD More! Your chibi's are ADORABLE. And at some CGed parts it looks totally professional.

 

no not really...i never heard of it???got any link to it???^_^and thanks for the compliment :blush: ....I actaully finishhed with Page 18...but haven't post it here yet...Cuz i htought no one would read it... :shy: ^_^ i posted it on the other forum's though^_^ :sweat2: