Creative Writing My love will grow

Like a little flame
flickering in the wind
soon to be a fire
my love will grow

Like a light wind
breezing in my face
soon to be a storm
my love will grow

Like a tiny seed
hidden in the ground
soon to be a tree
my love will grow

What started out in innocence
we fooled around so much
grew out to be
true love


--Silverline--

Okay this is my "love" poem, lol its kind of dedicated too a person. I hope you guys like it, please comment!

 

Beautiful! Gurl you take my breath away!

 

Thank you I am in a romantic and dreamy mood lately, my poems are completely changing

 

kyaa~! it's so... romancy....! heh. but it's really good, silverline! keep it up!

 

You really think its romancy? cuwl.. I am not THAT good in romance lol..

 

o I bet I know who this is too then. Your really good at lovie peoms. Plz write more of these.!

 

I liked it a lot. Congratulations, as it seems that you are quite a talented writter. I hope to see more of your future work.


- Kaiyon

 

i liked it as well. it is very good. keep up the good work.

 

oh oh oh :blush: such nice compliments, thanks a lot everybody! Well I believe romantic things are not my bestest but well
I do have some new poems that you might like.. I will put them on momenteraly