Fan Art my own drawings : Kimarhi of FFX

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  1. pardal

    pardal Crimson Moon

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    my drawings...

    hey take a look at this.... this one i draw it thinking about everything but the creature so it looks kind of bad...
    it's kimahari from ff-X... i'm very good drawing from sight but with imagination i'm worthless...
     

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    pardal, Dec 15, 2004
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  2. Strawberrypocky

    Strawberrypocky New Member

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    thats good..
    thats very good..
    sorta flat.
    your mixing some of the shadow in the art
    and the shading isnt completely blended
    and we cant tell if Kimarhi is 3 dimensional
    looks like 2 dimentional
    its good though
     
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    Strawberrypocky, Dec 19, 2004
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  3. ChickenBits22

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    nice,check out my new post and i think hes right :D
     
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    ChickenBits22, Dec 22, 2004
  4. Ciel

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    We all can see you have a thread made. So don't advertise in other people's art thread. It's rude.

    pardal, your art is really good! Strawberrypocky left a good comment about your shading. It's the only thing that's preventing this work from being a 'WOW!!' just work on darkening and cleaning up areas you wish to be lighter :) keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you.
     
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  5. Jaken

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    I agree with what Strawberrypocky said. Also the image looked a littled blurred, but that could have been from scanning it.

    Really nice job. Could use alittle work, but you got talent ^_~. The thing that I notice the most in your drawing was that the wings looked a bit flat. A funny shape. Other than those little things. Keep it up. I expect to see more of your work!
     
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    Jaken, Dec 23, 2004
  6. Strawberrypocky

    Strawberrypocky New Member

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    ^^
    I agree with her
    and I feel really bad now
    umm i got busted
    gomen..
    And I hope your drawing improves
     
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    Strawberrypocky, Dec 23, 2004
  7. pardal

    pardal Crimson Moon

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    hehehehe.....

    thanks to you all.... its of big importance to me that you write your critics being their good or bad so i can improve my skills in the drawing part...
    the wings of my kimahri aren't very good because i didn't know how where they when i draw the picture...
    by the way... see this one.... it's a little diferent.
    it's more straight and it gives a better perception of a 3d shape i think.
    it's a moomba from final fantasy VIII.
    hope you like it.
     

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  8. Jaken

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    This one is much cleanlier. Would be a good one to cg. Has bold lines and such.

    On the downside to this drawing. I didnt see alot of shading or texture. There was shading, but nothing much. It needs some more texture. So it looks like its not plastic. Plus if you add texture it makes it look more 3-D.

    Over all it was nicely done. Keep it up! And Keep practicing!
     
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    Jaken, Dec 28, 2004
  9. Krystal-chan

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    :eek: That's really good. It looks a lot cleaner than the first one you posted. The only thing I think you could improve would be the texture like Jaken said. Though don't get me wrong I think it is really good, better than I could do. :D
     
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    Krystal-chan, Dec 29, 2004
  10. pardal

    pardal Crimson Moon

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    been taking a formation on manga drawings and it has been very helpful on this matter, one of my first i'm posting now....
    hope you like it... :D
     

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  11. Seishin

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    Amazing, you're really improving.

    However, i think the part around the neck looks kinda odd. But still, it looks great!
     
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    Seishin, Feb 2, 2005

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