Creative Writing My Poem

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Nephilim_X, Jun 17, 2005.

  1. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    A goon.
    It's what I am.
    We are legion;
    but don't hate us ma'am.

    We hear your cries of hatred,
    your burning rage,
    your spite,
    You sneer at us for we seem to be antithesis to the light.

    Souls without moral, who take delight in torment,
    Tales of fools who live with psychos so they can pay the rent.
    Manipulations of your pics, mocking of your voice,
    But in this harsh unloving world, do we have a choice?

    I am a goon, with cold cold heart,
    A sick, sick fool who would rejoice in midgets fighting bears.
    And so I go to my fellow goons,
    Protected, at the bottom of the stairs.
     
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  2. luvweaver

    luvweaver Ad Jesum per Mariam

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    Wow, nice :)

    Any dedications? :D
     
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  3. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    All of Something Awful.
     
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  4. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    o dude that was wicked Neph. I liked it! :D
     
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  5. Reisti Skalchaste

    Reisti Skalchaste New Member

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    Beats my mock poem. That's pretty cool.
     
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  6. Nightmare

    Nightmare Chaos Rules

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    Great job Neph. I really like it.
     
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  7. Hitokiri Tenma

    Hitokiri Tenma New Member

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    i liked it.
     
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  8. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    I wouldn't except anything else from you Neph. Of course I liked it. Reminds me of some stories you once wrote.
     
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  9. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    How on Earth are people not recognizing this is a gag poem? :(
     
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  10. Reisti Skalchaste

    Reisti Skalchaste New Member

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    They didn't realize mine was, either. :(
     
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  11. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    I got that. I wouldn't except anything else from you, Neph. I can still like a gag poem. The stories you wrote I honestly thought they were a gags stories too. I could be wrong on that.

    Sorry Shinryu but I don't really know you. I kinda thought of it but like I said.

    I knew this would happen. I hope you two just didn't offend any members and get them to stop posting their writting.
     
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