Art Natana(My first pics added to this forum!)

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Kos-Mos, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. Kos-Mos

    Kos-Mos New Member

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    This is one of my RPG charaters named Natana. I desided to draw it so I could show you all what I could do? I dodn't get to add all of the poem. And if you would like to see it READIBLE just go to the firction writing boards. The pic and peom are both called I open my eyes.
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    Just incase that Didn't work. Here's an attachment.

    P.S. For those of you who cant tell, I did this on paind, word art, and Adobe.:D
     

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    Kos-Mos, Aug 27, 2003
  2. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    heres my advice to you:

    learn to draw, then learn to paint. baby steps:)
     
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    Sen, Aug 28, 2003
  3. Ciel

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    but babe, can you find anything you like about the work? I mean her background is really pretty.. perhaps choice of colouring. anyways, Prene, it was a good job. if anything, you can look into guides for drawing bodies. but I love the concept. so I wish you luck with your rpg story ^__^
     
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  4. Influences

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    decent job how to improve?

    1.Make sure you line the shoulders up the same direction as her torso

    2.The face is alittle to big/round especially on the right hand side

    3. the collor bone doesnt start in the middle of the shoulder

    4.the hair should come out from her head alittle on her right hand side (This is my opinion)

    5.Her (Her) right hand leg looks like it is really thin at the hip either that or the way the legs come together look alittle odd

    6.Elbows belong at the waist unless you have a specific style that goes with that (My elbows go about to my hips) well maybe justa lil above

    7.Her stance seems abit odd (unless she is modeling)

    I think you did a good job on the hands..is this all of the picture?
     
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  5. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    why are you pickin' on me, Ser?[​IMG]

    Prene: [​IMG] you know we all have to start somewhere, but as some people say, we have to learn to crawl before we learn to walk. CG is difficult, and you wont be able to develop your drawing technicques correctly, then again, this is just my humble opinnion.

    Practice every day, dont give up, youll be great![​IMG]
     
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    Sen, Aug 29, 2003
  6. Ciel

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    .. I'm just trying to point out that always try to look for something good in the artwork and discuss it along with the bad. try to end 'the bad' comments with at least a 'good' comment. pweese? and I didn't mean too maake you cryy..:(

    anyways, your last comment to Prene was really nice ^__^ I just hope Prene comes back here to her thread.
     
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  7. Kos-Mos

    Kos-Mos New Member

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    Of course Idid. I'm a big girl. Ican stand to hear my art isn't the best. To tell you the truth, I was hoping that I could get some good advise.

    What is CG art? Whatdoes that mean?
    Antway, I'm hoping to get some of my hand drawn art on soon, but I'm still trying to figure out my evil scanner. It dosn't like me much.
     
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    Kos-Mos, Aug 30, 2003
  8. Sen

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    oh, CG stands for Computer Generated, commonly used to refer pc colored drawings.

    now, you keep on practicing, good luck^^

    Brightest Blessings:)
     
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