Art New drawings...finally XD

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Feena, May 2, 2005.

  1. Feena

    Feena New Member

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    I did some drawing over the weekend, since I haven't been finishing anything properly in a while I'm afraid of going a bit rusty - and my art exams are next week :eek:

    I used some photographs that were in the newspaper as a reference for this, parts of it are still a little funky, I know, but constructive criticism would be appreciated.
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/Feena/dance.jpg
     
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  2. furryb

    furryb Blind guy drawing...

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    Pretty cool. A little less shadow on the right breast and a little more hightlights on the legs would have added to the pic though.
     
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    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Personally I like to tell you the truth..I really don't have any constructive
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  4. Feena

    Feena New Member

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    I really don't know if that's a good or a bad thing :p

    Thanks for the comments !

    furryb: In the photographs, her legs and most of her arms were pretty much silhouetted, which is why I liked them so much. I think you're right though, maybe if I hadn't gone so quickly from dark to light the effect would be nicer.
     
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  5. sweetasuka

    sweetasuka Ahh Ice-Cream!

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    I personally liked the drawing. I think you did very well on it and I look foreward to any future drawings from you :) I like her face a lot for some reason, so good job on that
     
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  6. yakamashi

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    that's a pretty nice picture. but i would fix the shadowing on her left side, and parts of her face. it looks a little too flat, and her eyes are spread out too far apart.
     
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    Emphasizing where the light comes from would do good. Meaning, less shadows from the right side. Still, it's a nice drawing.
     
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