Creative Writing New Poem

I haven't been on here in a long time, but I'm pretty sure this is where this goes... So...Here is a poem I wrote called Apart from Soul

The secrets I've been keeping from you
Are tearing my soul apart
I need to find away to escape
filling the holes left by the ministry
The needleing pins
All pulling down
Lies beginning to take their weight
Building up, war rageing inside
All lies. All hate enlisted for war.
Tearing my soul apart
Pulling feverishly, at the very seams
Holding them together
Death looks to be the only option
But never give up. Don't rule Dispair
All falling up... All comming up
Tearing my soul apart
Strangle to pull back. Give up faith
Dead becoming the fool
Going no where as you bleed
Dieing as you turn
Even the God of Death
Fights on my side
Tearing my soul apart.

 

ah, this is a very deep poem. And I mean deep as in deep feelings. You make it sound strong somehow. Nice poem and very confincing