Creative Writing Nothing really gets to you.

Tethered to an imaginary person,
you can wait all you want.
Do you want me?
Am I considered worthy?

She isn't into you,
Doesn't even know your name.
Why arn't you looking?
Am I nothing?

I can see your face in my sky,
I can taste your lips on mine.
Yet there's no way to get to you.
Don't know what you want me to do.

I'm thinking you're a bit off here.
Know you should be looking my way.
I can only say how I feel.
Can only wish you to be real.

Because like you are to her,
I'm like that to you.
Doesn't mean I have to face the facts.
Not like I'm quick to step back.

Cause All I think about is you.
All I really need is us.
Fighting gets me nothing.
Guess I'll have to start rushing..


Hey Ragnarok, I love you. =)

(note: Yeah, I was bored enough to make a poem for Ragnarok. =X )

 

Nice poem, better or less than most but still, good poem. Keep it up. God bless.

 

Heh, thank you and God bless to you as well.
Mind you, It is slightly jokish. =/ Ah well, thanks anyway.

 

If you're joking about this- Would you mind joking about someone else? It's making me uncomfortable and to be honest, I don't really like being told how someone feels about me by another, especially when it's someone as close to me as that.

If you're not- I feel badly for you because however you feel about me, I can't return it.

About the poem itself- it is well written, and it is an enjoyable poem- I'm turned off from it because it's about me, is all.

 

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LMAO.

Alright, let me clear everything up.

That was a joke and if it made anyone uncomfortable, so be it. No more poems from me from now on because people take them far too seriously in most cases. Everything I post is posted the second it is typed. None of these take much thought, nor should they. Poems flow, etc.

So, enough from me. I'm very sorry Ragnarok for making you uneasy. =)

 

Your poem is wonderful!!! Don't stop posting em,I like them!

 

You know you could of PMed her about this instead or making it public and making her lose face.

 

well no worries Rags, cuz she's mine! ^^ Great poem dear. Keep it up, Rags.. that was really mean.

 

Heh, no need to blame him. He's e-relationshiping with someone on boards and I neglected this with my joke so I might have offended not only him, but her. My apologies to both once more. =)

 

No, I kinda need to apologize too. I took the thing too seriously and didn't think to act with discretion toward it. Sorry ^^;;;

Anyway, no need to give up writing poetry for us, especially of that high caliber. Just I wasn't sure if it was serious or not is all.

 

NOOOO SOD (Soap Opera Drama). I am after all ASO. I wonder if anyone else is left from that. Hmmmm.

Nice poem other then that. Never stop posting your work it is always nice to read it.