Creative Writing Peachy is holding on

Anyone could write a emo poem. Care to pay attention to mine?

Pieces of me

Rip it goes flying, landing softly on the floor
that's for my hope and faith
I placed in god, to heal my dad
thanks for taking my world god
he was all I ever had
Another piece is slowly ripped into
that was for all the miserable daughters like me
Thanks mom, this is a special tribute
All this I owe to you
The next piece I rip and I smash it
thats for all the kids i've beaten up
thanks for playing all innocent all the time
when You know you always asked for it
The last piece I hold tightly in my hand
this is for all the times
I have to face my pain head on like a man
for never being offered a single bit of help
for the memory of all the abuse and cruelty
i've seen or ever felt
now everything i've ever kept
my heart, my life, my world
is laying crushed in pieces around my feet
what do I have left?​

 

...sad...I know you may have already heard this...but...I pity the life you're in. I wish you had something better than this. No one should go through things like what you have been through.

 

Peachy... i dont pity u... i look up to u. Ur so strong so dont forget that... and I have found the answer to ur question after some thinking!! U WILL ALWAYS HAVE US! And if u EVER need help u better ask for it... cause we will aways be here to help u... no matter what!Cause thats the least u deserve... i want to help in anyway i can! I hope ur life gets better.

 

The reason I pity you is because some people that go through stuff like child abuse will not end up good unless you do something about it. Not thinking about won't make it go away. I really hope that you get through it some how and like what InuyashaROCKS said, you still have us. If you don't have anywhere else to go, then come here.

 

Yeah, we'll ALWAYS be your friends! Cheer up!