Creative Writing Poem for the brokenhearted..Written in 1 minute and fourteen secs.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Turning, Churning.
    Your words are burning.
    The slightest of touches render me speechless.
    You kick and you fight,
    You can't make things right.
    Alone again.
    Guess you can deal with being alone again.

    Waiting, hating.
    Is it worth sedating?
    This feeling you have now as it dawns upon you.
    You scream and you shout,
    You try to get out.
    Alone again.
    Maybe you're uncomfortable being alone again.

    Hearing, fearing.
    Your eyes are now tearing.
    The day seems to end just as it began.
    You run and you hide,
    You're finally inside.
    Alone again.
    Now you know what it feels like to be alone again.
     
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  2. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    I must say Lucky your poems are interesting. The way your words flow shows you have a nice vocabulary. I am not too fond of rhyming myself. Some words may have been stretched some to fit but they fit well enough. Over all good poem for being done in less then 2 minutes.
     
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  3. Samurai Me

    Samurai Me New Member

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    I loved it!!! Im so glad your writing poems again lucky!
     
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