Creative Writing Poetry Contest

Ok lets have a little poetry contest and see who can come up with the best poem.Let me start.

The Devine:

Welcome to the devine

Angels take me away
To a beter day
Blessed is the wind
Dieing from with in

For ever I shall pray
To see their devine ways
Bringing peace on their wings
Beautiful voices shall sing

Angels take me away
To a beter day
Blessed is the wind
Dieing from with in

And they sing to me
Soon you shall see

This devine wind of mine

For ever you shall know
Of a purer soul

Angels take me away
To a beter day
Blessed is the wind
Dieing from with in

My soul shall never be gone
As long as my angels live on

See this wind of mine
Welcome to the devine

Well it isn't realy a contest but more of a collage of poetry....

 

Comfort

Sometimes the world seems sh**ty
Sometimes the world just doesn’t look pretty
Sometimes the world can seem like a scary place
Filled with dangerous you don’t want to face

You can turn around, you can walk away
But you never know what happens unless you stay
So, young warrior, wipe away that tear
You are the one they fear

You see, mean acts may be remembered for a while,
Yet you have to power to forget them with a smile
Don’t get angry, keep your calm
One day you will receive your palm

They are simply unaware of the pain they cause
And you should actually pity them because of that loss
They are unable to sense how others feel and think
And your angry words would only cause them to blink

It’s no use to yell or fight
Just ignore them, keep your pride
They don’t know any better, have no clue
Don’t see the power inside of you

The power of your heart, the power of your mind
The power to ignore, the power to be kind
Just ignore them, for they don’t see
Just how powerful you can be

 

Wasted
I wake up and get dressed
To go to school.

I go every day and
Lose hours of my life.

My life is wasted it
Has no point.

I feel as though
It could all be ended.

By flexing a few muscles to
Push the blade through my chest.

Suicide could
End it all.

My life is wasted I
Wish it would

Just
Cease.

Sorry it is kind of long. It was written in first draft form for school and i tried to give it a different, school appropriate, meaning about how school is to time consuming. This is the way i wanted it to sound. It is about my friend who's brother commited suicide and it was written in his perspective the day before the thing happened.

 

The first two were good. I like them. The third one is good, but it's sort of sad.

Here's mine (sorry for the length):

Destiny and Angels


~~~~~~



Visions of a planet



And an angel she did see



The power to foretell the future



Would lead her to her destiny



A bet with her superior



Under 13 seconds for the 100-meter dash



Would win her a kiss



But a boy she did clash



He spoke a weird language



And ordered them to run



But the dragon appeared



And it was time for some fun



He fought as best he could



He tried to defend those he didn’t know



He needed the energist



That bright stone with the pink glow



He finished the dragon off



And took out the stone



She asked him if he was okay



But he answered in a hostile tone



“I’m not so bad off that I need a woman to worry about me”



She slapped him and yelled



He really didn’t see



That she was truly worried about him



She wasn’t dancing with glee



“Why can’t you at least say ‘thank you’?!”



He realized his mistake and was going to speak



But the pillar arrived and carried them away



Now her friends were left with answers to seek



She arrived on a strange planet



The boy by her side



Wolf-men appeared



And offered them a ride



They were taken to Fanelia



Where he presented the stone



Everyone was impressed



As they all gasped



He had succeeded in his quest



She was taken to the castle



She missed her home



Who should arrive then but an annoying little cat-girl



Who started to roam



She took possession of a magical necklace



And took off like a cat



But the other was right on her heels



She wished she had a bat



Many adventures ensued



Ones that changed her life



Her friends were right by her side



To them fighting was (a) rife



Problems then came



Not those of battle but those of love



As she fell for one guy



The other was jealous of (Allen)



As time went by she began to think



‘Who’s the angel from my vision?’



She had no idea that he was near



She had only been wishin’ he would appear



Her feelings for Allen began to leave



As her feelings for Van grew



But she still didn’t know



That he was her angel too



Finally the time came when she would have to part



By then she knew whom she loved



She was hoping he felt the same way



She didn’t want her feelings shoved



They said their goodbyes



Her eyes (were) filled with tears



He looked up at her sadly



He showed no fears



“We’ll see each other again, my love.”



“Do not fret.”



“I would rather part from you and see you later”



“Then never to have met.”



She took in his words of comfort



And made a promise to the stars



“I’ll return to him one day.”



She wouldn’t let there be scars



And on some days, people claim



When they’re on their last breath



They claim to see an angel carrying his love



Then they sink into death



The story of an angel and his love



Is one people love to see



They’ll never forget how it happened



Or how it came to be…



~Fin~

 

that was long but good. My poem was a true story, that is the really sad part

 

I gotta say they are all pretty nice and as far as sad poetry goes..... well lets just say that almost 75% of all the poetry I write is either as morbid or more morbid than that.

No offence

 

Happpiness

Can you find your happiness in this tainted world.
What do you see when you sleep with your dreams.
What lies of love confuse you in this blood stained world.
You ache to find true love to feel.
A feeling that you've longed to feel.
A feeling that you hope is real.
Show the peach stained sky to feel.
Looking to the sea of love.
For the fish that you dream of.
Swimming in a sea of tears.
Hoping to drown all your fears.
But the blood of lust stains you true.
Your happiness is not yours to feel.

 

The Road

cool on my cheeks
fresh
whispering across
my cheeks

silence
a noise from above
looking up I see nothing
silence

following
the tapping of heels
the splits and cracks
like a river
a course they are
following

no end
to the river
it flows
stops
stutters
rushes
but there is an
end

to my road
journey of my day
by day
by day

I return
and I return
endlessly

but it ends
like a spiderweb
a spiderweb

it can be broken
can it?
strength lies in the eye
of the beholder

 

Ok, this is my first adventure with "publishing" poetry that is important to me so please dont laugh!!!!!! It was originally a song too, so thats why its messed up in the middle.


A Black Velvet Sky

Its a dark night
the stars are shining brightly
against a black velvet sky
the moon glow our only light

I look into your eyes
and wonder what youll say
before we say goodnight
and the wind blows softly, it sighs

I wonder if youll kiss me
and make this night comeplete
I fall breathlessly into your arms
and realize that were meant to be

Im standing here in the starlight
waiting for our first kiss
as you lean in closer
i whisper hold me tight

Goodnight baby goodnight
as Juiet said
parting is such sweet sorrow
and though
i know
Ill see you tomorrow
your face remains in my sight

I just know
ill go home again
and spend a sleepless night
just thinkin about you
are you thinking of me?
and so

I hold you close
not wanting to leave this place
i wanna stay here forever
youre the one i love the most

I close my eyes and wait for your kiss
as the night breeze carresses my face
you whisper i think this is right
as anothe moment becomes the one ill miss

Now the night is growing late
i should have been home an hour ago
i think my thoughts fiercly
and you kiss me so this is my fate

Its like nothing ive ever felt before
soft and gentle, the world stops
you whisper til tomorrow
as you fade into the night no more

WELL, thats it, I guess its okay, but as a close friend told me once,, the best are yet to be written.
~Ginger

 

Well...I'm at school, so I'm going to write this on the spot!
Let's see...what will I write about?

The Room

I see a room with the door unlocked.
The door is always unlocked.
Never did this door have a lock.

What is this room?
What purpose does it serve?
It gets on my nerves.

I dream of the room.
What is there inside?
An unspoken rule forbids entrance.

Never one to follow the crowd,
I do finally what I'm not allowed.
In this room there are books.

Here, I see not books.
Here I see adventure.
Love, Hate, War, Peace.

I see a history.
Power-hungry tyrants.
I see a future.

We look to the past
There, we find the future.
Years of destruction,

And then we rebuild.


>.< Not bad for something written at school.

 

Asinity

Of course profound ideas need not apply,
Least we are to create ripples in the water.
Conforming is the lone way to comply,
Unanimously all peoples must concur.
They have endless ways in which to deter,
These deep contemplations from being uttered.
There is little doubt that I must aver,
And yet there is no doubt I will go unheard.
And although it seems odd, these thoughts are surd,
A look around will once again prove my point.
Fools can be spotted commonly in herds,
Viewing idiocy, just meant to disjoint,
One from one’s self. If we are to appoint,
Blame on anything let it be knowledge.

It is a sonnet.

nnioR~

 

Wow.
I cn't believe it.
I wasted a whole year on you.
You, who didn't care about me "that way."
We were best friends, but-no matter.
To me you were the world, but to you I was one person.
Why didnt I realize?
REalize that I was wasting my time.
My energy.
My emotions- on you.
I a;ways thought you were the one-
but no.
You werent anybody.
You led me on, day after day-
week after week-
month after month.
Until the other day when I looked at you ad realized.
That you saw me as only a friend.
Not a girl, not someone with thought, and feelings-
Emotions, words, goals and aspirations--
just another friend.
Another friend that you could dote on,
***** and moan to,
put down, bring up.
lead on, lead away,
because my knight in shining armor was nothing but a vision.
A hologram, that led me into darkness.
To die.
I saw the light-
the light of a true friend to help me out of the tangled brambles.
To free me from my enraturement with a figment.
And you never knew.
Yiu were clueless, comepletely enraptured with your vision.
And now hat Ive gone--
You see me as a figment.
I hope you have a friend like I did.

 

My Life

This is a song wrote by me for my band CGC or Crackas Gone Crazy (Girls Gone Wild spin off with guys )

I just got cracked in my face
My whole ****in life is a waste
I bleed just to see
see the life you have taken from me

I fear nothing
I hear nothing

why is it I must always fail
I try and try but never prevail

Ill find you
Ill hurt you

my thoughts of dementia
Are what I will show to ya
Who do I really need
peel myself a rotten seed

feel my wrath
feel my hate

Why
must I cry.....
What
I must cut
My viens beg of me
can you feel this
can you feel me
can you hear this color of deth

I fear nothing
I hear nothing

I hate all, they hurt me
I hate you, you ****ed me

Ill find you
Ill hurt you

can you feel my flames
do they hurt you, take my blame
scapegoat that you are
die like a snake with all the rest

feel my wrath
feel my hate

why
cry....
what
****
who are you
good bye

And thasabout it what you guys think most people around here like it.....I like it considering it took me like 2 1/2 minutes to think this up (I like to freestyle) I sing this to Heavy metallic sounds and 2 X's tempo hehehehehe

 

Took ten minutes got in the mood made another song hope it sounds like rhapsody when I get done

It is called My Mind bled for you

(Deep Dark voice)
The shape of your heart
Is nothing like I thought
You thought, you heard
These mystifying words

(Higher voice)
And now I’m hypnotized
Bleeding at your minds command
I’ll never realize
What you were thinking
You put a spell on me
From the beginning

And now I see the light..….
(Deep Dark voice)
I’m gonna show you the stars
Tonight we’ll take our flight
When the dark has arisen

(Higher voice)
No, I shall free my will
I, can see straight through you now
So just leave, I am fine alone

(Deep Dark voice)
In the dark……
I will watch the leaves swirl
And the empty swings inside the park
Now I think, only of you
And the hate, where your’ debts are due (Raise voice ^)

(Higher voice)
High, now it’s time that you shall die
I hate, Every line in your’ face
Bleed, as my mind has bled for you
Why must it end this way
Why must my sanity fray
Starting over, again and again
I pray for love and I pray fantasy
But tell me to pray for you
I’ll wish heart to die

All that stuff about the deeper voice and higher voice is to remind me of the rhythm

 

here's one

The winter only lasted one day
then the rain started to fall
The snow that was so bright, now ain't so white
a deceased snowman lies in the gutter

here's another

When I am walking down the street
my eyes get to meet
a homeless sitting on the pavement
The snow falling down on him where he sit
with a hat on his head that doesn't fit
and thinking how this oculd have happen to him

ok this is the last

I look out the window only to find
a leafless tree standing naked and alone
I'm thinking that it must be cold and lonely
but what can I do to help it

I wrote these on a math lesson in the beginning of the winter and finally found them in a book I'd forgot about

 

Ok....here is mine...people tell me it sounds like something Tool would write...but...anyway...here it is...


" Tears Of The Unshed'
By: Rek



An eye stares at me through the clouds
Echoing the discrimination of their rules
It starts when one thought over-powers the rest
And the little guy gets through...

With my feet upon the ground
I contemplate the sound
Of a whole generation drowned in calamity
Remembering all the times that Ive been
Bathed in his impurity
Free my thoughts to release you all
Free my soul to please you all
Feed my will to run away
And free my pain and make me stay...

Decide to spend the rest of this life
Putting the pieces back together
Wave a fist in the air and sing your "revolution"
I hoping that your doubts will free your hopes and opinions out the other way...
For they are a plague
Rid yourself
And eat the full-plate

Half of this world dies while the other prospers...
Half of me remains crucified while the other dangles free
This mask...forced upon me...is starting to crumble

He laughs as he sits in the throne
that you f***ing idiots built
I sit here...alone in my throne
Rotting into the Apple
While eating my way back out....



That is it...whew....that took a while...
Hopefully you guys will enjoy it...

 

I want you to stay, but I wont stop you...

I stand in the door sill, watching your back
as you go. I feel my knees shaking, but dont
show it.

Tears are rolling down my cheeks. Every day
and night. I hear and see the sadness in your eyes.

I'll miss you, I know. But I wont hold you back. I will
be forever in despair. But you must go your way and
I must go mine.

At first we were happy, but then you got bored. Or
atleast, that's what you made it appear to be.

Our wedding was grand. The feeling I felt was better.
Just to look in your eyes made me want to cry.

I wanted to cry, because I knew that you were to good
to be true. I told myself you would hurt me. I told myself
you would make me sad.

But now I find, it's the other way around. You smiled at
me. But It wasn't a happy smile. It told me that I was
hurting you. Though I could not believe You were hurting
more than I.

That time has long past. I still wonder if you think of me.
I know I think of you. Every painfull though rides with me forever.

I've seen you now and then. You're married agian. You
have a beautiful family. It makes me glad. To know that
I made the right choice makes me glad.

You're Wife is lovely. Your pets are devine. But most of
all, your two daughters are angels, sent down from
heaven. You and I know this. We know this because
we know that they have a chance. They have a chance
to live happily. And that happiness will last.

 

The True Meaning of Love


There is a time when you feel a lone
A time when you feel like nobody wants you
A time when you feel there is now where to go
Like you are wasting your time
On the one thing you care about
The one thing that you feel is right
Love
Why waste your time
When no one else cares
When nobody looks at you in class
When nobody cares what happens
At night when you freeze
The chill from being scared
Scared of not being together
To share love of two people
To have some dreams that maybe
She might be loved
For she feels the soft fur of her teddy bear
Dreaming that maybe it is her love
Her partner, her companion, her life



theres mine, it took me about 10 minutes to do it...i didnt know what to call it so i just called it that...hope you enjoy!!!

 

How I count the ways my thoughts long for your breaths of language,
And all of your thoughts remembered on for days to come,
Now I think back and see it has only been two full days,
Not to blight and thrash the moments but to further see,
A new legion of memories is approaching my conscientiousness,
Happiness for once can finally be achieved….

Took myself three minutes to think of what I wanted to say and this is what came out

I will save posting room I just made this one also

Flash

Firey waves of musical notes smashing the pavment,
Lighting the sky to new day one of many to come,
All I am is a sound you though you knew,
So I have decieved you my next victim,
Heavens shall shake upon my wraths…..

I wrote this in tribute to my guitar it's name is Flash