Creative Writing RollerCoaster

~This is a dedication to my beloved, Mathew~

Riding the fastest rollercoaster is how you make me feel,
Makingmy stomach do flipsand dips...this seems so unreal.
Our first kiss made my knees weak and made me oh so dizzy,
And as you hold me in your arms...my mind goes blank and fizzy.
And as I gaze into your big blue eyes...so blue as the oceansI swim in,
I can see a reflection of a girl, so in love, that is smiling with a big grin.
Two people standing side by side...hand in hand...your fingers laced in mine,
Our hearts weaved togetheras one...sending me to could nine.
And as your soft lips brush along mine...you hold me oh so gently,
Making my body go numb all over...saying "I love you" so passionately.
Hearing your voice eases my heart and lets me know you're there,
For every tear that falls down my cheeks...you wipe them off with care.
And even in the darkest times...you always make them bright,
You have given me a reason to live...you have walked me towards the light.
So now two lovers walk side by side, hand in hand, your fingers laced in mine,
My heart is riding a rollercoaster...and I'll stay here by your side through the test of time.

-Krystine

 

it is a very good poem Kryshana

 

thanks very much! ^_^ I put my heart and soul into this poem because I wanted to tell everyone how much I love him! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

-Kryshana

 

Very nice poem keep up the good work. Could use spelling check though. Still good. It is a keeper.