Rurouni Kenshin : Shoukan No Aato

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  1. That guy!

    That guy! Expecting Father

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    Well I have been gone for the past while because I've been busy working on a Rurouni Kenshin fanfic. Can you tell me what you think of it, and what I should change ;) thanks ^___^x

    http://www.angelfire.com/anime3/xenoexistence/episode1.htm

    oh and ya, the beginning is a bit of the Kenshin OVA...
     
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    Zanza .Net-ing & PHP-ing~*
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    Well .. these 2 weeks I have exams .. after it I will bored to
    death .. so ,, just wait then i will answer you ..

    I am saying that so that you wont think that no-one cares ;)

    Take care .. :p

    P.S. I likes the beginning though ;)
     
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    I can't read now:( !
    I'm going to work now, but i promise to say somehting when i read it!
    Hugs!:D
     
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    Arigatou for looking at it Zanza :) I really need to do some editing on it, and maybe make the fight scene a bit longer. hmmmmmm...

    Oh thanks Chupito too, I know fanfics take a while to read ^___^x
     
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    .. !

    Its so great .. even that I am still in the beginning :p
    Great work THAT GUY! .. :anime:

    But I've found few mistakes in your writing (they are nothing), probably you were typing fast :D

    So far .. these I've found :p
    *I know .. you are going to say : she only shows my mistakes not my talent !!* :p

    Your's is soo great .. even I can't do that good :sweat2: !!
    Keep the hard work ..
    Need more complement ?? ;)
     
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    Arigatou! I'll fix those up soon :D I sort of took the idea for the first part from the Kenshin OVA ^^;;;;; (I already said that before but hey!) but it sort of fits in with the overall plot that I'm planning :D:D:D:D:D


    THANK YOU FOR READING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_______^x


    Oh and I'm thinking of a Shin Gun to give to Xeno, you know gifts people are given when they die and come back to life... what do you think I should give to him?
     
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    I am not sure that I understand you .. :p
     
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