RPG Archives Shadow Age

Ok pplz I am makin a rpg game called Shadow Age.
I have a full cast of characters and a storyboard ... but I am unsure if the cast is 'in a manner of speaking' complete ... so i decided to ask the ppl of A&M. This is the cast tell me if there are any 'vital characters' missing.
This is the cast with their basic status:
GOODIES
Kylie Konoko - Heroine Main char
Max Atics - Hero sub main char
J.C - Pilot and gunner
Jason Archer - Swordsman and Knight
Naomi Kara - Holy Mage
Katie Kara - Dark Mage

VILLAINS
Tenshi Konoko - Incredibly evil char (last Boss)
Kasura - Seductress
Tadashi - Evil Sorcerer
Shindu - Hell Gate Keeper
Tenchi Mk.I - III - military experimental weapon become self aware

thats the cast ... any vital roles missin???
i would appreciate the help thx all.
Oh and if u want to know anything about the story then feel free to ask me

 

We need a basic storyline before we can help you further. Right now I say family of the Hero's until there is more that is all I can some up with. The family members could be supporting or more.

 

ok, the story:

It is basicaly about stopping a boy with huge amounts of power.
Kylie Konoko (Tenshi Konoko's sister) is the leading role in this and each character has a unique reason for going on the adventure or quest or whatever.
The essentials of the story are that; Tenshi Konoko, dispises humans after they waged war on his home planet, and almost drove his race to extinction. So he seeks to destroy all humans and gain the power to go to Earth and Destroy it. Kylie being the Protagonist see's that as twisted and wrong, so she decides she needs to stop him.

The other characters as I've said have their own story line and reasons for wanting to stop Tenshi.

Tenshi himself though, he was a good guy to start out with, but after seeing the things humans were creating and doing to the planet he decided he would take action against them, in doing so he didn't realise he was also destroying is own planet aswell. Eventually he was consumed by his own hate and lost control of what he was doing, and so he sent the world into Darkness and Fear = Shadow Age.

The family members come in later versions of the game although some are seen in the game.

Thats the main jist of the story anyway. :dizzy:

 

The crew on the spaceships.

Here is a question is this for your RPG/story for you to do?

Because this is RPG section is for members to RPG. I have seen yours in creative writting. It is best to go there for answers.

 

its for the actual rpg this one, the story is different.

 

this threads just taking up space now - Unless there is 1 more post from som1 else after this 1. Mod's destroy the post!

 

Said and done.