Art *shakily posts a drawing*

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Kawaii Akuma, Apr 7, 2003.

  1. Kawaii Akuma

    Kawaii Akuma New Member

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    Well this is my first posting @.@
    The wings are all screwy, sorry >.<
    Just something doesn't make it..... anime-like :-/
     

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    Kawaii Akuma, Apr 7, 2003
  2. Desmin Chevek

    Desmin Chevek New Member

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    What no posts yet? :( Not cool. Ya know this is a really good peice of art!


    I'd like to mention the things I tend to mention to most people who submit line-art--solely. Values are your friend, in art they MAKE the drawing stand out. Perhaps a little color (Colored pencil, or even CGing?) would really make this picture a sight to behold! =3

    It's very good, artistically speaking you might need to work on something I like to call... 'joints' =P Yea, Wire frames are good for that. Maybe a little more detail would help. Such as.. I don't know, jewelry and what have you?

    Proportionally it needs a little work and the wings look a bit odd, I'd suggest a few winged dragon pictures as reference.


    ~Dez
     
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    Desmin Chevek, Apr 8, 2003
  3. Kawaii Akuma

    Kawaii Akuma New Member

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    awww Thankies ^.^ yay!! *glomps* I was actually going to ask if someone can color it for me >.< I suck at coloring ^.^;;;;
     
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    Kawaii Akuma, Apr 9, 2003
  4. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Definitely cool.

    Edit: Either of them could seduce me anyday! [​IMG]
     
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    Nephilim_X, Apr 9, 2003
  5. Superfly

    Superfly Active Member

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    Looks nice, simple, but nice^^
    The wings look a bit funky, bit odd, no biggy!
    The girl on the front is pretty cute though...
    and yes, i agree, let's see some colors in this piccy ;)
    lol
    keepit up, young grasshopper...
    *wanders off into the windy plains to take a nap, cos it's bedtime...*
    :p
     
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    Superfly, Apr 9, 2003
  6. Blue Crow

    Blue Crow New Member

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    You and me both!

    Anyways,I think you're a great artist.The picture is very nicely made.
     
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    Blue Crow, Apr 10, 2003
  7. kibu

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    nice work! just keep it up.
     
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    kibu, Apr 10, 2003
  8. chibivampysk8r

    chibivampysk8r New Member

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    really good pic me like. in case you didnt know this is a complement from a person like me. i'm a critic...j/k dont let me mess with your head!:)
     
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    chibivampysk8r, Apr 11, 2003
  9. masterferio

    masterferio New Member

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    dont listen to chibi

    she's a little on the wierd side butt......n/m
    its pretty good... but it really could use some color
     
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    masterferio, Apr 11, 2003
  10. Shen

    Shen Indefinately away

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    No need to say sorry to anyone Kawaii Akuma. You have the privilege to show us your pictures and you should feel proud that you put it up there. As you can see no one has criticised your picture yet.....Except me! Muwahahahaha. (J/k) :D Keep up the good work!
     
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    Shen, Apr 11, 2003
  11. Kirei na kimyou

    Kirei na kimyou New Member

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    Not bad!
     
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    Kirei na kimyou, Apr 12, 2003
  12. seraphinx

    seraphinx Oy, Artista!

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    It's a good drawing, much more complex than the stuff I draw. I haven't tried drawing overlapped characters yet. Yeah, the wings are quite awkward-looking, mostly from their position. With the girl's body nearly horizontal like that, it seems like she's supposed to be swooping through. Maybe that can give you an idea of what her wings should be doing. Oh, and her neck is kinda gnarly.

    The girl in front reminded me of Misato Kisaragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion, probably cuz of her clothing style. You drew a really nice upper body, well angled and realistic. Like most anime drawings, her legs are extra long which is both a good and bad thing. (Personally I like to have realistic proportions for the limbs; I mean, some drawings by CLAMP have characters with legs so long, it's freakish.)
     
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    seraphinx, Apr 14, 2003
  13. goldenangel

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    that ws a good picture i liked the skirt it looked almost real but with out the color
     
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    goldenangel, Apr 17, 2003

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